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Another clop short side story that may or may not be canon, eh?
Dpn't tell me this is canon with the whole alicorn of passion...
You really do have a way with these, Silver. They always have a complete feeling to them, both story and sexual pleasuring combine into a coherent and satisfying whole.
Aside from that, a lot of satisfying kinks in this story. A lot. You just can't help but sail all the ships, can you? Claim to be innocent then slip all these out when I'm not looking...
I haven't read this, but why is it tagged "human"? There are no hints of humans in the description, and a quick search finds no words that would indicate humanity.
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I say all of my Lemons are Non-Cannon to be safe XD Though Meadow_Dawn may think otherwise about this particular one, lol.
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Hey, you don’t need to be an Alicorn to experiment with some of life's more exciting endeavors XD
But no, this Lemon's not related to the Alicorn of Passion. Silver's reference here is more a joke than anything. As the character of Silver Wing is based off me, and I write these sorts of works as well, my friends all assume Silver has to have a little bit of a lewd side to him, lol.
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Thank you very much, glad you still enjoy^^
Official ships, and Non-Cannon ships are two very different things though. I'll Non-Cannon ship my characters all day long for the fun of it, haha.
Though this Ship was all Meadow_Dawn's idea. She desired this tale to be told, so you can blame for her for this particular Ship :P
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This story has the 'Human' Tag as in the story Meadow Dawn is from, (Mirror of Worlds) she was originally human. So I felt it was better to be safe than sorry and include it, as it is a large part of her character.
7234729 You can explore a lot more with Alicorn prowess by your side.
These things take time, magic, stamina, strength, health, patience,...
A story I read had a huge group of people (no spoiler) working on the ponies version of kama sultra for nearly a centuries before completing (they are still adding more volumes as new things pop up). Detailed everything about how to screw all types of ponies.
While I enjoyed the story as a whole, this bit rankles with me. In proper BDSM scenes the submissive is always in control, their wishes are always respected and cared for. That wasn't the case here. The instant Dawn said, very clearly i might add, "N-no..." Dawn panted out weakly, "B-back to the ground, p-please...!" They should have paused and done just that.
Compound it with "Ah ah ah," Soryks teased, "We're the ones giving the orders here, not you little Mrs. Pet." and you have two arrogant arsehole playmates that should never be used again.
As a whole, the story is good, but right here there was no care or love shown towards the subs feelings or fears.
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I agree, 100%. In proper scenarios the Sub does have the final say, and Dawn does here as well. Let me explain... There are a few factors that only come to light once you've read the story as a whole, and those hint at what I'm talking about. Come the end of the tale, during the reset and relaxation time at the end, a few things are said in the bath. Stalwart explains that it was his idea that Skyros and Soryks fly her into the air, but also that Dawn never actually left the warehouse, so she was safe regardless of how it seemed. Now that in itself doesn't excuse her plea's being ignored though, what does however, is their Safe word. Dawn could have used it at any point had she truly desired to stop. It was her choice not to, and even Stalwart comments on this fact. Dawn's reply? That she trusted him not to let anything bad happen to her. So while it can seem like she was being improperly treated, by the end it is revealed that she always had full and total control. She chose to trust in her partner and push through her fears so that everyone could enjoy the moment.
7236226 I get that 100%, and I did love the after-care moment in the bath at the end. it was sweet and very affectionate, so all the kudos in the world there to you, because not every BDSM writer gets its importance.
As I said, as a whole the story is very good, you still get an upvote and a favourite. it's just that particular little scene didn't sit all that right.
This was actually decent and really hot.. Loved it