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- offline last seen Apr 1st, 2021
Orion Light
[Retired]Hello and welcome to my page. I am blunt and honest, but also very critical. I normally keep to myself, but I do like to chat sometimes. Just don't say anything that would upset me, please.
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Okay, this story is amazing. I really enjoyed Rain's personality and her relationship with John, particularly on the date, was very sweet. The clop scene was very hot yet also romantic, so I can say that I loved the story. Have a fav.
Nice story! Needs a sequel. (from my piont of view)
And just as a tip: When Rain and John wanted to start the real action. -> You had the same passage in there twice. Was a little bit confussing.
Cheers!
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Fuck, how did that get there?
Thanks for pointing that out. My Google Docs like to be a troll with me.
Where can i find the complete picture at?
Look how hot Spirit's mare look in that pic.
You might want to remove the source, might get you in trouble with the admins.
perfect clopfic 10/10
Great story! But I do recommend having an editor look it over, there's too many mistakes to put in the comment section. Good work though!
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Okay, thanks for the warning.
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You got to be kidding me. I used Google Docs to make sure nothing is wrong with the story. Just tell me where they are and I will destroy them.
7567850 I can't really tell you where they all are, it'd be a very lengthy process to put down here in the comment box. I recommend that you only give suggestion rights to somebody in the google doc you typed this on so that they can make edits that you can see and then confirm or reject depending on whether or not you're satisfied with them. It makes the process much more faster, easier, and cleaner really. Less tedious. Trust me, I edit for a number of stories on this site and have found this process to be one of the best options available :)
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Do you use Google Docs? If you're willing, I can let you go over it for me, because I'm just doing bits and pieces like fixing tenses. Are there actually grammar errors or run-on sentences, because those are my work's worst enemies?.
AWESOME!!!
Holy crap. I haven't seen that movie in FOREVER! Used to be one of my little sister's favorites.
I just took a quick look and want to say, that storys as long as this one should have some sort of break point. I mean some sort of mark where you can stop reading and start again a little bit later.
Now the question is.... can she bear his child/foal?
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Sorry, buddy, but in this story, ponies and humans are incapable of having a child/foal due to different chromosome levels. I intended to add a bit of realism here.
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I should let you know, however, that this isn't the only one-shot that is long. Look up 3005. Great read, by the way.
Other than that, did you actually enjoy it?
By the way, is your profile picture suppose to be Sheik? If so, it's very cool looking.
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I took it out due to it being NSFW.
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Magic can make miracles happen
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Yes, I know.
To be fair, a difference in race didn't stop your last story.
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Different story and universe. I don't want to use the "human knocking up ponies" concept in every short stories I do.
Besides, our Rain isn't in heat.
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True, but who doesn't like a happy ending?
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I'll bet she would look hotter if you ask.
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What?
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Oh. At first, you sounded disgruntled, but good to know.
WTF? this is not Anon x Rain this is a phony a big fat phony
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Did I not mention before that I used a different kind of anonymous name instead of using Anon, such as "John Doe"? I did it this way because the name Anon is overused a lot, so I came up with a unique name.
In a way, he is Anon, but under a different kind of name.
i can say this is a vary good one shot.
the story is put to gather really good and flows nicely.
exultant writing.
Orion Light query: you ever going to do a sequel?
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Sadly, there were no plans on a sequel for this one.
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I wish you did because I wanna know what happens to rain and your oc next?
Haven't read it yet but two things
1. The moment I saw that pic it instantly clicked where it was from
And
2. 7570424
NOOOOOOOOOOOO
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It was taken out because the rules in the Story Creation screen says not to link NSFW in the source, description and chapters.
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I know, I know...
But I reserve my right to whine about it even if I agree to it, right? I think...?
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Yes, I understand.
I'm glad they didn't just jump in to it like so many stories do these days. You even showed off the playful side of her that was in the movie so I say great work.
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I try my best to keep her personality the same or near similar as her feral form.