This story is a sequel to How to Cure the Feather Flu
Twi and Rainbow agreed to tell all their friends about their love for each other ASAP. Rainbow did it in ten seconds flat. Twilight--unfortunately--was busy...
When an old friend comes to Ponyville to tell Twi her feelings for her, Rainbow gets enraged in jealousy, challenging Twi's old friend to a contest for Twi's heart. The friend accepts, to Twilight's dismay.
The contest is slowly making Twilight go crazy... Will they get the hint before she freaks over their shenanigans?
Chapters (3)
*awkward moment alarm goes off*
I kid of course, good fanfic so far, I look forward to seeing more
go get her moon dancer! great first chapter, this is really going to be great! well done!!
oh rainbow what have you done! this is one fine story! i can not wait to see what next chapter brings! well done to you!!
Oh boy, Rainbow's done it this time...
Oh, boy.
This isn't going to end well.
For anypony.
*goes to find a place to hide from the forthcoming, inevitable fallout*
Okay, hang on a sec here.
I just read in you latest blog entry about this story that the latest chapter is the final one for this story!
How can that be, when it's marked as "Incomplete"< and more importantly, you "ended" it with a cliffhanger like this?!
Explanation, please!
7108712 1) I always forget to mark my stories as "complete" once I finish them.
2) I might make another sequel down the line, if this one gets good views and stuffs.
7108726 Oh, okay.
Thanks for the explanation.
And I hope you do make a sequel to this. That ending... Rainbow upset and angry enough to try and destroy Twilight?
*shudders*
It just begs for one.
7108738
Ummm... spoiler tags please?
Rainbow seems a bit out of character at the end there, mad enough to try and destroy Twilight? I don't know, just can't see her doing that even if she was mad about a break-up which admittedly was her fault. Actually, to be honest I can't see her getting mad or jealous enough to try and kill her rival for Twilight's affections. Sorry, but that's what I think.
7109601 Oh, *facepalms* Forgot to add an AU tag. Mah bad.
7109606 Yeah, okay if it's alternate universe I'll let it slide. But I still wouldn't see the normal version of dash doing this. I just don't like bashing, let's put it that way.
7109158 Um, excuse me, but what exactly did I say in my post that would require a spoiler tag?
I just commented on the end of the last chapter and said that, because of that, this story deserved a sequel.
That's all.
Also, see 7109601's post right below yours, if you think mine needs spoiler tags.
Rainbow is loyalty she would never do anything that she did in this story. Sorry I had to give this a down vote.
7112454 There's an AU tag there for a reason.
You should make a story where Rainbow goes on a quest for revenge.
7112831 and yet she is still loyalty in this world. A good story can only have so much suspension of disbelief.
7119306 Okay, whatever.
Your first in my Review!
7544934 Oh, sweet! I got a review! :3
Haha, yeah... I was really tired when I wrote the first and second chapters, so thats why it's so confuzzling. I might revise them someday. IDK. :P
*watches video*
And there probs won't be a sequel, but IDK about that, too.
But, hey! Thanks so much for the review, man. :D