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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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Time may heal all wounds, and finally, Applejack feels like the injuries caused by the Grand Galloping Gala have faded. Despite how annoying her attempt to raise money had been before, she can grow from the experience and show that she isn't just the same farm pony that those aristocrats think she is. The question now is, when an enemy comes a knocking, will she give them the same chance?

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Comments ( 9 )

Hardly a romance. Otherwise, not bad for fluff.

Yay! Some character development for a "Villain" is nice, since most of them have close to none.

I really liked this - this interpretation of Flim was definitely interesting, and the relationship between him and AJ was believable. I wish you had more, but this is amazing as is!

Applejack propped the board up and watched as Flim slowly fiddled with the programming, adding the prices to each of the messages, and allowing her to check. The farm mare nodded with each one, until they got to the new program ten. Homegrown smiles: ZERO BITS!. She smirked at that and Flim grinned back. “Looks like even I can get one. I didn’t think that would be possible.”

this was the best part

7543721 ...Tempting, as it could be fun and cute. I will consider reviving this concept.

This I could see going somewhere romantic. It’s a nice start to what could be a much longer story of love and redemption

This was a very interesting and very sweet story so the Flim Flam Brothers are up to their no good trying to sell their products but then flim saw Applejack and she doesn't look like she's in the mood but he still wanted to cheer her up in his own way even though Applejack was a little suspicious with him she wanted to give him another chance still it is pretty nice to see them interact with each other without being each other's throats this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

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