Twilight can't seem to stop staring at Braeburn's flank. She loves the way it moves, the way it jiggles. She can't seem stop staring at him in general, it seems. In fact, she would love nothing more than to run her hooves over his chest and run her hooves over his flank, then his entire body and push her muzzle onto his...
But Braeburn doesn't want that. He doesn't even like her in that way. They're just friends. Twilight knows this.
Perhaps a flight lesson with Rainbow Dash will help her to see otherwise.
Please give a like or a dislike. It tells me how well I'm doing! Thanks.
Just a one shot. Got the pic from here: Other source
Based on this comic: Source
And this guy helped me edit it: PoisonClaw
This is my first edited-by-some-else story! Yay!
twiburn...or would it be braelight? either way more sounds good
6845317 Twiburn sounds better to me.
I've never actually read a Twiburn fic before this one, nor had a remote interest in shipping it. (Now, I may or may not ship it a little...)
I think this story was a great, sweet introduction to the ship.
6891362 Glad you like it and I'm glad that I inspired you!
(please read in Braeburn's voice)
Too bad it aint clop, but that's just my opinion! In all honesty t'was a very good fic
....you do realize that you explained a good portion of all that Pinkie Pie is, right?
Kudos.
It would have been awesome to see an art work of him wearing a Wonderbolt uniform
“Yeah,” She said weakly. “I think I hit my funny bone though…”
“I don’t find that humerus! You’re supposed to spread your wings way before you get close to the ground. Were you even watching me do the stunt?” She asked suspiciously.
Lol Funny Bone joke never gets old
Whoa did Braeburn had like a supernatural powers or something?
Well then that was something it was nice to see that rainbow is teaching Twilight how to fly properly and doing stunts or something like that and it looks like somebody has a little crush on Braeburn because he was there watching them training how to fly but Twilight almost lost control but Braeburn somehow use his Supernatural powers to save Twilight with a tree I still think that's actually pretty cool and kind of sweet that he was worried about her they even asked her to a date which wow was pretty fast well this was a pretty interesting and very sweet story keep up the good work
You know looking back at this sentence it was like a huge projection of earth pony magic