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Another collection of silly short stories.
1. Homewarming: In which Twilight gets a new neighbor, learns more about her than she ever knew, and Pinkie breaks the Fourth Wall more than is absolutely necessary. "I do not!" You do too, Pinkie. Get out of the summary.
2. Innocence: In which Cheerilee must give her students a lesson that she does not want to give them.
3. Accident: In which Little Strongheart runs from a foolish stallion who doesn't understand the meaning of his actions.

Part of the Butterflies Continuity.

Zecora vector from http://shelltoontv.deviantart.com/art/That-Wicked-Enchantress-Zecora-243984000.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 50 )

IT's Ditzy/Derpy and Doctor Hooves that are Scootaloo's parents; as far as I can tell, and it was that piece of fanart by CoyoteRainbow that showed Scoot being irritated at having a "lame" mother while heading off to school with dinky.

This one: http://coyoterainbow.deviantart.com/art/New-Headcanon-280771569?q=sort%3Atime%20gallery%3Acoyoterainbow&qo=25

That's my guess anyway, not too sure about the father.

Aww, that was sweet! I actually like this couple.

D"AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

One of the most underrated ships and it was done well. Brae x Strongheart . D'AWWW
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That was my basic guess, but I had no idea about the fan art.

How the hay did you do that????

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I used to watch that artist so I saw the image when it went up ages ago. I guessed Ditzy easily and the Doctor was just my standard "who's her husband" answer.

I could be wrong about the doctor though but I stand with my decision.

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I agree with the doctor whooves theory myself.

Nooooow, as for the story.....


:raritystarry: I LooooooOOOOVE IT! Well done monsieur! Have a mustache... :moustache:

D'aaaaaaaaaaw! So sweet! Everypony loves Brae because he is a cute, adorable moron. XD

Here you go.
Firstsauce.

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Don't worry. It's not going to be a very serious story.
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Ding ding ding. Here aren't your three cookies.

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Damn, didn't expect to get the father right on my first guess. yay! :pinkiehappy:
I'm still not sure how the doctor could have let Ditzy have a unicorn foal, or is he a timelord in your version? Or is it just freaky pony genetics like with the Cakes?

As for the other story, I've just seen a few stories like that and honestly it never ended well. I can appreciate you making it lighthearted but the though of one of them being "sent away to be fixed" just doesn't sit well with me. I'll give it a look but even so I'm hesitant becuase the overall concept is what bugs me, not the execution.

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I already have the Doc's story all plotted out. It'll be in the next Silly Stories.

Also, people, stop tracking this. It is completed. That means it is not going to update anymore. Favorite it, if you like it! If you want to track something, track me!

I will favorite this for Braeburn and Strongheart. I love those two.

"You're not crazy," Spike lied.
Lol:moustache:

fun fact: Cape Water Buffalo urine is so flammable that some tribes use it as lantern fuel.

*snort* This is hilarious! :derpytongue2: Can't wait to see how the rest of this goes. Good job on making Zecora rhyme still, and Pinkie's breaking the Fourth Wall so often may or may not make me laugh to death :rainbowlaugh:

Well buck me sideways, that was adorable! D'AAAAAAWWWWWWWW.

:scootangel:
This chapter is fantastic! Cheerilee is pure awesome.

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was a great ride! I love the reset with Pinkie and Spike's deja vu comment. You're quite funny and I laughed out loud and read quite a few bits to my partner as I went along. Oooooo! Nice twist with Zecora, whom I adore, and we agree that some rhyme-lovin'-punk needs a butt whuppin'.

Oh Cheerillee.......it was almost the same way when my cousins asked me how babies are made....it ended the same way...

Very humorous and cute one-shot chapters. More please?:twilightsmile:

awww that was sweet.:heart:

Greatest fourth wall destruction I've ever seen. Enjoy one internet flavored cookie.

Mother of Celestia, this is pure awesome. I died of laughter at "So are we going to have a baby?"

How is it, that with 699 views, and a request for comments, there are only six comments (seven including this one.)
That's one in every hundred views.
Anyway, I like this. Came across it while looking for Little Strongheart fics. Its good.
Thus, I have resolved to read 'The Butterflies Continuity', and also build a fifth wall around my house.
That should keep Pinkie out.

This is Australia...

Braeburn x Little Strongheart is my new favourite ship.
I used to be apprehensive about Braeburn, because so many fics portray him moronically(especially this one), but now I realise that I love him for his moronicness. It's great.

This is Australia...

You know nothing, Jon Snow.
:twistnerd:

Very good. Very very very good! :pinkiehappy:

D'aaaaw, this is so cute and kinda funny. Not any surprises in the second and third chapter at all, but a good read nonetheless. Well done.

This is funny and you write one of the best rhyming Zecora's I've ever seen, only one of the rhymes seemed forced, so well done on that count.

I have to say though, that Pinkie's breaking of the fourth wall is, to me, the worst part of this fic. The rest is great but the parts with Pinkie talking to the narrator is just out of place, over the top and distracting if you ask me. But that's just my opinion.

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo ADORABLE!!!:pinkiehappy::heart:

You should have seen the look on my mother's face when I, along with a neighbor's kid, asked her 'what does the word f**k mean?' She sent us to the gynecologist for him to explain it. We ended up watching a filmstrip about getting our periods.

Sandbar: Do yaks have some traditions like this?
Yona: ... why?
(both blush)

"Good morning, Pinkie," Twilight said. She'd learned to stop being surprised when the pink pony suddenly popped up out of nowhere. Saved lots of time. "What party?"

Well after living in Ponyville for so long you will see a lot of silly and crazy things always happens in this small town

"The writer, Twilight. Just a second. DON'T PRETEND YOU CAN'T HEAR ME UP THERE!"

You broke the fourth wall again Pinkie Pie lol :pinkiehappy:

"Geez, is your dad a king or something?" Spike asked sarcastically.

"Yes, my young friend, that is true. But I don't recall ever telling you..." Zecora said, stepping back to make sure that her sign was standing up straight.

Huh interesting I mean we already know some of her history from the season 10 comic but this is a very interesting twist

"Relations between our nations are not as good as they could be. So my father desires that I..." Zecora stepped aside, allowing Twilight and Spike to see the sign she had been adjusting. "...practice diplomacy." The sign had two words on it, written in large text. 'Zebraian Embassy'.

Coincidentally in season 10 comic future reference that sooner or later they will visit Zecora home land

Comment posted by Yoshifan30 deleted Jul 23rd, 2021

Okay so just to give you a little heads-up I just discovered your story just now and judging by your publish it's the way it is from 2012 so I'm going to have to treat this story as an alternate universe as you said on your authors note says because after watching the later episodes including the comics yeah some of them are going to be a little reference to those later series anyway so it looks like Zecora build a house in Ponyville since what happened to her old house burned down and not only that we found out that she is royalty from her Homeland and she basically build an embassy here very interesting start of a story and of course Pinkie Pie breaking the fourth wall lol but anyway this is going to be a very interesting story can't wait to see the rest

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon...

...The less said about them, the better.

I don't blame you Cheerilee when you had to deal with the most irritating kids even though we will find out why in season 5 I will go crazy as well

"...Yes, Apple Bloom, that's right. They have... sleepovers."

'What am I doing.'

"Does that mean that Fluttershy and Big Mac are gonna have a baby?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Wait, we had a sleepover last weekend. Does that mean we're having a baby?" Scootaloo asked.

'Misunderstandings detected! Abort! Abort!'

Oops lol that make me laugh and that's kind of misunderstanding

"No, no, no. The mare and the stallion... and it has to be a mare and a stallion... have to both love each other very much and want to have a baby," Cheerilee corrected herself. Twist raised her hoof. "Yes, Twist?"

"Doeth that mean that Auntie Bon-bon and Auntie Lyra can't have a baby?"

'Crap.'

Oops that's twice of another misunderstanding and yeah that's kind of hard to explain and very interesting having Lyra and bonbon can be related to twist at least one of them are

A/N: If you can guess who Scootaloo's mother is from this, you will* get a cookie. If you can also guess who her father is, you will* get another cookie. If you can also tell me what piece of fan art I got the idea from, you will* get a third cookie.

Unfortunately I'm not going to get the cookie because Scootaloo's parents names are Mane Allgood and Snap Shutter but I'm sure whoever you choose on your fanfiction I probably get it wrong

Well then Cheerillee that did not go well as you expected and probably you shouldn't start with where does babies come from because that's a very sensitive topic and you know how the kids would take that out of contact but it was funny I like that chapter

Awww this was a very cute chapter short but very cute it looks like little strong heart was feeling overwhelmed and she felt like Braeburn and her can never be together because they came from different world as in because he's a pony and she's a buffalo but he didn't care he loves her so much and they can get through this and with that he asked her to marry him and she said yes yeah I ship those two so much and that's a story that sandbar and yona, Gallus and silverstream, smolder and Ocellus should learn about this no matter who you are Love had no boundary as long as you care for each other nothing can break that apart no matter what species you are this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

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