Also clop shall be in the story

By that do you mean this story is porn?

Forgot I was even following this, so I decided to reread.......... How in the hell could I have even enjoyed this story? The writing, pacing, grammar, it's atrocious.......

I really hope he can fix his mistakes and get back his body maybe clone his new body so it can live it's own life. I really really hope that his love with his true and they all stay together and hopefully add more way in the future. And finally, I hope Starswirl don't have to die. I can't wait to see what happens next (no rush).