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You should really get yourself an editor, other than that not bad. I especially like the concept of his sweat turning mares on.![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
It's still good yeah but you still need that corrector.
Nicce![:rainbowdetermined2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowdetermined2.png)
6710164 I know and like before waiting till I have a PC so I can save the chapters before letting someone edit them
6710426 Gotcha.
6710831 yea so please bare with me until then
6710426 Awesome chapter!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
I'd love to see Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Fluttershy in Jason's herd!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6710866 haha really now?
6710871 Definitely!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6710927 haha I'll see what I can do
6710863 I'm bearing man I'm bearing.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6710937 awesome dude
6710943 Sweet! Thank you!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6711116 no worries, just have to figure out how
But that all changed when the fire nation attacked...oh wait wrong story.
6713129 you don't know how tempted I was to put that on the end XD
Where's da clop ? Da chapter ended so abruptly I was lik Noooo I want MOAR Rawwww!!!
Very cruel of ya ta leave it on a cliffhanger like dat
6714227 haha I left it like that man cause I needed to put up a chapter and had no idea what to do next
Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd Herd
"I know Muay Thai" (cracks a smug smile at all the many useless and ridiculous aspects of various martial arts)
"most stallions see mates as property" "the ratio is 1:7" am I the only one who sees an issue here?
OMG now that's a real man helpen a mare when he sees she needs it respect .And he has to have Fluttershy and Twilight in his herd non nonnegotiable for this story there the cutest mares is the show please.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
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6809663 I see what you do, as the males would be considered as though a commodity, thusly the property. There'd be (comparative) gender role inversion, which likely means a "Stallion's Sufferage" and (probably) an Equal Rights Movement for Stallions.
I really love this story but I have one complaint WhY are the chapters so short
7261693 or, because stallions are so rare, they develop a superiority complex
Boom!!!
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Dab-Dab-Dab!
Damn... only 5 chapters in and already kisses are flying
Why do so many people make this mistake...
If there's more than one species on the world or in the area it should be "everyone, everycreature, etc."
Kind of racist/specist to mention only one species out of the several in your vicinity.
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i was still a new writer and wanted to be a hit in the in crowd
Shoulda kept her legs closed until they were married. Kinda odd he’d leave her pregnant as his fiance, though, since babies is one of the main (pretty much only) reason guys get married.
Being respectful to a sex is irrelevant, everyone should be treated with respect until they lose it or earn greater respect. Rather, I would find it a turn off and red flag for her to mention treating her sex as special in any way.
Why not? She’s not your wife and it’s your home.