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I'm enjoying this story immensely. keep up the good work I can't wait till the next chapter.
Luna for head mare
Also would be cool if he goes through a size change ...
I meant height, get ur head outta da gutter
Like master chief size (7-8ft tall)
when he learns whatever is in that book
wish it was a little longer because well i wants to know more![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
I can't help but feel that the fight with the scorpion thing could have went longer. Of course he basically just got lucky that it didn't think that the gun was some kind of weapon. Plus it is still just the beginning. I am sure that some future fights won't be too easy.
Speaking of that thing, so it made him stronger huh. That is convenient.
Anyway, I am okay with longer wait between updates. Longer chapters are always a plus. Plus extra time also means that you would be able to weed out many of the mistakes that might crop up.
6732628 as interesting as that would be to have him grow that big, I find it amusing for him to court mares who are taller and way heavier then him as it woul make some scenes amusing
6732879 yea and the scorpion thing isn't actually dead. It's an ambush predator and now it's really pissed off
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Oh. Well that is going to be fun.
Also, congratulations on getting your first hundred likes on the story.
6733209 thanks mate oh and a few things that I mentioned in this chapter will be explained in the next
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You're welcome.
Cool.
Will he be forgiving rainbow dash and the others for how they treated him right off? Or will he make them work for it?
At least some of the mares forgave him. I hope the rest of them will follow through with their own apologies.
6733943 I hope he makes them work for his forgiveness, especially dash considering how she treated him.
Indeed, 6733952.
6733956 Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against the characters. It's just in most stories the main character often forgives them to quickly and easily. It's basically like letting them off of the hook. Especially in dash's case where in a lot of stories were she jumps to conclusions and hurts or attacks the main character before realizing that they are not a threat only for her to get off scot free.
6733965 true on Dash's part. She let her ego get the better of her and say things that, despite the loyalty within her words, may be hurtful, which will be her downfall later on. Sometimes the best thing is to not say anything at all, especially.
6733980 I agree. But I like how in this chapter despite the fact that Berry did apologize, she still has to face the repercussions of her jumping to conclusions.
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The rest will have a long a tedious road to follow to have him fully forgive them, yes he will be friend with them and help them (with threats and events like a friend would) but his trust and respect in them is all but gone especially thanks to rarity his reputation is damaged
6734199 Awesome! I can't wait to see how this will play out!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6734227 yea it will be interesting also any background characters to would like to be in his heard?
6734243 Vinyl, Octavia, Tree Hugger, or Cheerilee. It's up to you really.
Tree Hugger would be a very excellent choice for a herd member. But that's just my opinion.
6734370 hmmm okay I'll see what I can do
You started a herd, not a harem. You should try to find ponies who can help/improve the herd overal. It is like a big team in which everyone plays an important part to ensure the safety of eachother.
The Bloody Hooves zombies or the Sunny Town zombies?
6734905 like bloody hooves except a kin version (I'll explain more later as they are a plot item later on)
6734922 A little more interesting too since they're anthro's in this.
6734924 yea, he'll encounter them again
dayum he be gettin all da bitches
can you get him to find a hidden chamber with Princess Molestia in it and become friends and then she joins his herd.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
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The pirates of Caribbean reference and the mummy now your going original.
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Come to think of it, Luna as head mare would probably help her acclimate to leading modern ponies.
You realize this chapter also indirectly shows the girls did not admit to anyone that they were wrong. Just like how Berry kept trying to make excuses. Not all that interested in fixing anything or owning up, are they?