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Im so fuckin done lolol![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
I do think that Berry got off way to easy aswell. Ah well.
6735325 yea, sorry about that
Awesome chapter as always my friend.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6735973 awesome to know
Huzzah Luna for head mare yay![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Hattrixn you are awesome
6736066 yea I know that this story has 100% of its story and grammar as complete shit, I know that, there are an incredible amount of details that I fucked up while writing this as I changed my mind several time while writing this story, all the chapters have terrible grammar and I don't fix it as I don't notice it until I post it most of the time so a lot of these chapters will be pulled back in, as for logic..... Well I am attempting to add my own variation to the classic mix along with a story inside the main story that I have only got the key point locked in, so honestly, thank you for the critasism, I definitely need it to allow myself to improve and I am sorry
6736086 haha well a lot of people asked for Luna to be Head Mare
Reading this story is like riding a flying train. I have no idea where it's going, if it will crash or how it's flying but at the same time I feel like i'm going to enjoy the ride.![:rainbowdetermined2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowdetermined2.png)
6736221 it's better then it being predictable
6736352 I'm getting the feeling that my comment was insulting. My apologies I was merely attempting a humorous compliment. In short i'm greatly enjoying your work with this story.
6736547 no no no my friend I got it was. Joke and I wa just stating that I enjoy having the reader guessing
Hmm are you going to do a chapter when all the mares are in heat and this is what I want Jason to say when heat comes
RUN IF YOU WANT TO KEEP YOUR VIRGINITY
while holding spike above his head
Just think of that image
That was funny good job keep it up![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
6736683 oh I am gonna do the heat season and it will be hilarious, seeing as there are 3 Alicorns now Xd
6736701 I will thanks buddy
6734199
Rarity and her fucking gossip habits (shakes head and sighs)
So there is definitely no chance of the Mane Six, except Fluttershy, joining his herd, huh? Not that I don't mind, since most HiE stories I read had them in a human's herd anyway and this is a nice change really.
6736973 they shall be divided between different stallions, save Rainbow as It may be amusing if she ends up with him oh and pinkie is gonna be in his heard (as it was requested)
6736683 All of the mares are liek "GIMME DAT SAUSAGE I NEED IT IN MAH DONUT"
6737084 XD as soon as I am confident in writing clop properly
(Reads the last several parts of the chapter)![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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6737319 I thought it would be a nice touch![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
6737113 I literally stayed up for 3 hours to read this... It's 1:43 am I'm gunna be tired for school :3
6737535 I'm sorry :(
6737545 nah man it's okay :P I really enjoy this story. The gramaticle errors are not to to bad and usually I don't notice them :D
6737976 cool I'll go through each of my chapters soon an fix them up soon
6736979
That would be amusing to see happen, though I have a feeling it will happen mostly because of Gilda.
Anyway, as someone else said, this was an awesome chapter.
It is cool to see him improving with his magic, though as he said, he seems to be more adept in the types that are either looked down on, or straight up feared. Hope that doesn't cause some issues for him.
Also on that note, is Speedy Gonzalez going to make another appearance. I can see him being a bit of a reoccurring joke if you wanted. Or just chilling at Fluttershy's.
The rematch with the scorpion was definitely awesome. Also better then his last major fight in my opinion. You are getting better at writing such scenes.
that ending was just hilarious.
6738185 thanks mate and Speedy will be a running gag also I'm gonna try and make the fight scenes like this or more brutal in future
6738286
You're very welcome.
Awesome. Though just keep doing the best that you can. Don't push yourself too hard with writing such.
6738291 thanks dude and i wont :) and i believe the next chapter involes trixie
6738292
That chapter should be fun.
6738292 Are you gunna have him kick Trixie's ass :D I hope so :D:D
6738736 nope, he is gonna fight the ursa
6738770 Even better :D
I have a quick question. Why story is marked as "on hiatus"? I hope there will be more chapters 'cause the story so far id great.
6739117 oh there will be it's just me saying that I can't pump the updates out once a day anymore (gonna have to wait 3 or 4 days)
6738977 and it's gonna b for a very funny reason also
6739456 thats great :) i assume that with helljumper is the same story? Im gonna start it today or tommorow.
6740911 yea cause I pumped a chapter of both out in one day because I'm not patient, but hopefully this way I can pump out chapters 4k - 8k instead of 2k +
Well they say actions speak louder than words, and yours contradict there Rainbow...![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
OMG this had me cracking up my cast hurts.
Translation: The Fucking Bimbo![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
bow-chicca-bow-wow![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
6754892
no she didn't. she mostly loyal to herself and her inflated ego
Wait, if their gender ratio is so extreme, how are homosexuals allowed to have their relationships? Wouldn’t that be a serious threat to their survival as a species? Since ponyville is pretty tiny yet apparently has a strong number of people in their gay bar (or even have one for the population size), doesn’t that also means homosexuality among males is dangerously high for their gender ratio and relative to their population? Babies have to come from somewhere and inbreeding can quickly become a problem in a small pool.
So much for a long, arduous road. Still, it’s not the end of the road.
It actually sounds like Moon is already doing the job of head mare.
I don’t care. Stereotypical, unrealistic, bad father trope nonsense aside, they are adults and are expected to behave as such. To say nothing of the fact that their mistrust wasn’t even based on something that was at all similar to the MC’s actions. And their supposed mistrust of stallions apparently wasn’t strong enough to be worth mentioning as it was entirely unnoticeable before and had zero effect on them flirting with him from the day they met him and extremely quickly joining his herd. Strongly indicating that either they are lying through their teeth or they have long gotten over it and are bringing it up now to try to excuse themselves from the consequences of their bad choices.