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Ha nice
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(Today's a blast from equestrias past). Could that possibly be this chapters name.
If you don't have a name for the next chapter, may I suggest (Royal Desires).
6753395 hmmm that works as I am contemplation a clop scene or not
6753416 honestly the feeling I get from this story is lunas confidence will falter partway into the sex scene, because she feels as the head mare she needs to please her stallion, so she tries to hard, then Jason takes control and passionately makes love to her, and reminds her she's like every other mare she doesn't need to be more or nothing less.
6753425 so that's a yes on the clop scene? And also I gave you another mention in hell jumper
6753446 I had actually just read that right when I received this message thank you. Hey so I gotta ask are you a dude or dudett.
6753463 I'm a dude, and yourself?
6753468 I'm a dude also, sry its hard to tell on this site, don't want to say something that refers to a guy if its a girl and vise versa.
6753476 it's cool, I'm guess most if not all of my readers are blokes
6753478 most likely, but there will be a fare number of chicks who'll jump on your story as soon a it gets more popular.
6753489 hahah maybe
They should really think about doing that pocket dimension room trick for the rest of the rooms. He is definitely going to need it. That, or he is going to have to do some serious additionside to his house.
Anyway, another good chapter.
Such little time before he has to isolate himself . Assuming he is even able to get away.
So Celestia has four personal students huh. Wonder who you have planned for the other two.
Maybe The Doctor can help with the parts he needs?
So, Luna seems to be taking to her lead mare duties right away. On that note, if you are still unsure about how such a scene will turn out you can still aways skip it for now, and add it in later.
6753476
6753478
Never assume that there are girls on the Web. You may never know who you're flirting with.
Something a wise man once said to me.
Themselves fighting words BWARR
6754118 that's why you should ask
6753523 it's a bit of both for the house, yea the doctor could help and also this clop scene is actually super important for Luna an Jason's relationship as it will show Luna that even though she isn't confident, Jason still cares for her
6754554
Oh, I didn't mean not have it happen. I meant have it happen off screen, and then at a later date you can add it in as a separate chapter retroactively.
Does that make sense?
6754583 yea it does, but I don't want to be that guy, like I can write the scene easily it's just gonna take time so it's not rushed or sounds like a preteen wrote it.... Unlike the rest of the fic
6754593
Ah. Then please take all of the time that you need. Even put Hell Jumper on hold if you must.
6754622 also writing a clop scene for Helljumper
6754625
Oh. Well then I wish you luck on both of them.
Not a bad fic, but you do have a tendency to rush through events quite often. I figure that may be due to your writing with a phone as you stated earlier. And that lovely auto-correct, messing up grammar in some rather unique ways.
I'll follow this and see how things develop.
6754329
(Pulls out sword of light) Are you challenging me, cause I'm itching for a good brawl.
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And you are correct.
6755398
(Pulls out Twilight Sparkle mini gun alicorn mode 2.0 ) do you feel lucky punk? Well do you? While putting hands on the trigger tail.
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(Sword glows a faint light) I don't need luck, because I will just pull a Kirito move on ya. You're better off using melee because my sword will deflect any spells and bullets you throw at me. Though I doubt you could beat me either way.
Can't really blame her, she IS new to the experience after all.
6755451
Whoops I pushed the big red button, Rainbow Nuke inbound.
MWAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA
6755451 I forgot which anime you were referring to all of a sudden
6755496 SAO
6755726 og yeah, I only got to watch half the first season before getting rid of comcast
6755745 hahah
6755471
(Hand glows white, levitates the bomb and redirects it into outer space)
Really, trying to commit genocide?. Seriously, I am disappointed in you.
Try dodging this. (Swings sword in an arc and sends a blade of air towards you)
6758190
Uses shadow clone jutsu to take the hit. Rushes in with 8 Trigrams 64 Palms. Take that for melle attack.
6758210
All you did was block my Ki, but not my magic! Haven't a taste of my Firaga Blade!
(Blade glows red with dancing flames, rushes in and slash)
6758224
substitute jutsu you hit a log :P
Mind transfer jutsu, I have you stab yourself in the heart with a dagger.
Your dead
6758262
(Revives as undead and bites you) Now you are dead as well.
Good duel. (Does a small bow before staggering off and moaning to find more victims)
6758326 off to find Dash and pull pranks on spike.
Come back if you ever wanna try again, or just wanna make a thriller amv.
6758326 only one thing to do now..... pull a black ops cryogenic slumber party
(+10 for getting the reference)
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Fallout 4?
6762787
It's from COD, isn't it?
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6754118
You two have some seriously strange conversations....
I like you guys.
that was a funny and awesome read that part with Subset turning Iron into a colt had me LOTF.
OK who the buck is Adrian storm ? I know I've heard that name somewhere but I can't place it. Little help please?
7443774 terracana ring any bells to ya.
And that they provide only a small amount of electricity to the point that covering the midwest US with them wouldn’t even fully power New York City, they go bad very quickly, making them and disposing of them creates large amounts of extreme toxic pollution, and gathering the critical resources to build them is severely damaging to the environment.