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pretty soon he's gonna need a bigger house, possibly a mansion
He's a real a** kicker isn't he?![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Get nightmare in that action to
I hope those nine foot tall alicorns dont fuckin break him. Lol![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
"Well fuck" wiser words have never been spoken![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Why fight? Just talk. Discover why the "Overlords" are doing what they're doing and attempt to make peace. Don't just start killing people. Death hasn't solved anything.
6724909 I get the feeling the author is unaware of how immensely tall and strong a being of 9 feet would actually be.
can please make nightmare apart of the herd and Princess Molestia to. that WOULD BE BEYOND AWESOME.
6810155 well, were here, killing everything in our path, so yeah.
Ok, honest feedback here. this chapter has ADHD. It bounced from him at his house into a fight scene for seemingly no reason. That caused some confusion here. Also, he hasn't been in Equestria for even a week, and he is in a relationship? someone who has had the patience to master a martial art has to have enough presence of mind to not be so impulsive with these decisions. I can understand the mares being all over him, but why would he be along with it so completely? So far, this is my take. gj tho.
What the fuck happened....
Seriously, what the fuck happened?...
This chapter is stupid. It makes no sense. Where the hell did everything come from?
I just don't get it. This chapter makes zero sense.
Please rewrite this![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
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yep. coupled that with all the spelling and context errors its kind of fucked. this story needs a good kick in the ass to get it in shape. kind of making me ashamed to be Australian right here. -_-
Charge in, throw it at him at the last second, tackle him down, and snap his neck or bite into his throat as hard as you can and thrash your head around. This, by the way, is what real combat is like.