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She should have lost the title of lead mare for that you know. She is supposed to listen to all sides which she didn't even do. Which would make Fluttershy the next lead mare.
6728638 yea true, I didn't actually think of that.... Thank you for the idea
If that were me it would take more than that to make me forgive them
6728663 yea, but I am playing on the fact that one he is completely alone two he hasn't fully,
6728673 fair enough but if it comes to light that he hasn't forgiven fully yet, well... It'll get interesting
6728717 yea, it will be
6728787 yea but then the problem is, when I write the how to spell part of my brain turns off
great chapter. I can't wait for the next. this is really good.
Wow. How very messed up of his so called friends, and herd mates.
If anybody is going to have to work to gain back his friendship after this it is definitely going to be Rainbow Dash. She is the one that ruined his reputation, and who knows how far flung it got.
6728793 yea, there will hell to pay in the next chapter, cause Jason starts taking snow to work with him
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That is definitely going to go over well.
Ok work on your errors then your good
6728841 yea seeing a she is quite a large Dire Wolf
Please don't have him forgive them straight away. They need to earn his forgiveness.
6728873 there are only four who he isn't angry at
Shy, moon, Luna and Tia the rest well they are gonna have to work hard
6728882 that's good to know, I hate it when the offenders get forgiven in the blink of an eye. If you make a mistake, you should have to suffer the consequences of it, not say "I'm sorry" and be instantly forgiven. I can't tell you how many stories have turned me off because of that
6728962 yea same, there is a few of the group that he forgives straight away though,
I would read off their texts either to them specifically or just read them out loud for them all. Then I would play a few voice-mails to drive home the point.
6728966 it's ok if it's the ones who actually grew a spine and admitted they were wrong, and beg for forgiveness, like berry did, hell, even Gilda was the first to apologize
6728999 I was think more along the lines of the ones who stood on hi side (I.e. Fluttershy) but that gets explained better in the next chapter
6729022 can't wait to read it
6729291 well it will be out in a day or two
OMC this story is almost at 100likes
6729331 liked, congrats!!!!
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6729355 hahah oh and also I am giving the Tia x Jason and Luna x Jason ships a kick forward in the next chapter
6729361 I'll await it with full attention!
You really need to go over thus chapter. It isnt zo much spelling errors as the wrong word entirely, like loving instead of living, try instead of dry, tier instead of their.
Sudden drop in text quality.
that was a awesome, sweet ,funny and great read I'm happy he not like ok I forgive you after you abided me .that would be such bull I would be pissed .
6730681 He needs an editor, doesn't he? That's rhetorical. Donnt answer that.
there is so much wrong with the first paragraph of this.. spelling, double spacing, overuse of the , key. at this point it just feels like you don't care about the story enough to even give it a second read threw. its like you typed it out and just when, fuck it; that's good enough. -_-
I believe you keep replacing he’s with she’s You make it sound as though he’s talking to a man
You need to go through this whole story and fix misplaced words and stuff like that it makes it hard to get into the story
Ow, my brain.
Exactly. If they apologize, tell them you forgive them but that they clearly are not worth pursuing a relationship with and dump them. How do you know they learned their lesson instead of just apologizing because they feel bad? They proved they do not even slightly trust him and are too stupid and arrogant to even get his side of the story. That doesn’t miraculously change.