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Oh yeah, this just wreaks of 3edgy5me.
5edgy6me. 3edgy5me doesn't suffice here.
Same
Fix grammar pls
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There's more to be added to this chapter, though I thought maybe people would have got that considering that I do the same thing with unfinished chapters in Darkness' Light.
Please update really awesome
:-)
Nice
Is that going to be it, because, damn, you keep adding more stuff onto this chapter.
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There's actually a little more that needs to be added to the chapter before it's really finished and I start on a new one.
5789135 Wonderful
the hells with the huge blank part?
5860730 yeah like wtf
5860730 unfinished chapter. Does that in his/or her other story too. Posts the chapter then slowly finishes it while its up.
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Glad someone knows how I work, though I wish I didn't have to make such slow progress for my chapters but I have to work with what I got. . . for now. If you're wondering though, I'm a dude.
5864588 sorry dude! Lol but I can see how people can get confused by it. Even I was for your other story Darkness' Light at first. But then I figured it out. but anyway, work how you want to dude. It is your story no one else can tell you how to make it. Im definitely a fan of your stories so ill wait for updates no matter what format they come in Many swags to you sir and have a good day!
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Wells thanks, though I'm curious on what you like about my stories. I'm curious because I've had both of these story ideas swirling in my head for a long time and am kinda surprised that as many like them as they do and it could provide me with a means to piece together any more stories that I may come up with in the future. You can pm me if you want or put into the comments it's up to you.
Looks at number of words and chokes on spit WHY DID YOU UPLOAD ENOUGH WORDS TO MAKE THAT NUMBER?!?! (3666) That is my lucky/unlucky number.
You might want to find an editor or proofreader or something like that. I noticed a lot of typos, misspellings and etc.
Well shit about to go down.
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I've been trying to find someone but I gotten no response from any of those who I've asked. But maybe that is what my mistake was; asking people through pms instead of putting a public invitation for anyone willing to help. So with that said, if anyone out there wants to lend me a hand on one or both of my stories, I would appreciate it greatly.
5977194 What kind of help?
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Help with editing as well as maybe offering some ideas with how the story could move along. At first I wanted it so that I would be the only who should any input on the way the story goes but I realized how idiotic it was to do that and I'll probably make that an officail announcement in a blog post.
5980967 I can help, if you like
5981053 I would appreciate that, thank you.
Update?
mussst read more
Holy shit this story is AWESOME!!!!
I FRICKIN' LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE!
Great chapter can't wait for next 1
I'm interested to see where this goes.
Great story, the only problem I see is that a few words are missing in some sentences to make it flow.
6334620 Would you mind pointing them out for me so that I could fix them. I seem to keep reading over them because I can't find them and I've read it over a few times though that's probably because I was in the middle of this chapter before I took that long brake.
More please and nice chapter
6334620 I know but my writings worse so I can't complain
Instant downvote.
6392663 And you say nothing until now, you sir need to get your priorities straight
...Interesting~
AWESOME MORE!!!!+
May I ask why your other story was put on hiatus sir?
6474636 I've been having a hard time trying to piece together Darkness' Light next chapter into something that makes sense seeing how my previous attempts have made no sense even to me. There is also the fact that I've been working on Outcasted Hero along with my new story Lighting Master. Hopefully I can get my groove back for Darkness' Light soon and get the next chapter up.
Or in simpler terms I'm taking a break from Darkness' Light though I suspect that it shouldn't last too much longer if my current thoughts are anything to go by.
Omg yes <3 more please hehe
As I said in your other story, the ponies really just need to get over themselves, especially Rainbow and Luna, I don't like using this word, but they are just straight up cunts
Well this is as bad as I taught. Is the guy being crazy person who talks to himself somehow plot relevant, or this is textbook example of telling not showing?
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Actually, him being crazy will be relevant as the story progresses. Though I can't say for certain for the chapters that are out now but as things begin to happen you'll see why I have set him up this way.
Betrayal and verbal abuseā¦ that's it? I was expecting physical and/or non-physical torture, perhaps some rape.
By non-physical torture, I mean proper mental/emotional torture as what actually happened can be classified as torture.
It has been over a month since I read this, so be aware that I might be forgetting some crucial information.
6481722 You might have to look into the next few chapters, I'm not sure I've been trying to get Darkness' Light back up and running to remember the details of all of them seeing how I've had these chapters completed for about a month before publishing them.
Though there might be something that may have been by anyone else who was expecting the same thing. David has already been tortured enough to where it doesn't affect as it should. If anything even if I had made scenes that involved some hardcore torture he wouldn't care seeing as he's gone psychotic though I believe I've mentioned that several times in the story, but again not completely sure.
wonderful as always. he should write more. quiet, it takes time, effort and the approval before a new chapter can be added.
I sense violence in the near-future~
This is such an awesome story <3