A Fleeting Fairy Tale

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The Great Derpsby

The Great Derpsby #1 · Oct 12th, 2015 · 1 · ·

You know, I found myself buying most of this. Blueblood being impatient and bringing home a floozy; that kind of asshole behaviour.

The part where he's of course hiding the fugitive comes across a little contrived, though, like an excuse to have the badass OC get back at him with more than words or a punch rather than because it makes sense. At least that's what I felt.

ShimmeringStallion

ShimmeringStallion #2 · Oct 12th, 2015 · · ·

6517429 The act of harboring a fugitive, from how I see it, is sort've like catching someone who's already an asshole, violating their parole in a way they didn't intend to; They didn't plan on actually getting him arrested, but it turns out he also assaulted Fleetfoot in the presence of a Knight; that's what'll give him time in prison, not harboring a fugitive, as there's no way to prove that Blueblood was doing anything more than having sex with someone at his home.

The fugitive being his whore is strictly coincidental, though. If anything, she's just sleeping around with "power" to keep herself informed on if anyone suspects her of being the fugitive she is.

Vario6050

Vario6050 #3 · Oct 12th, 2015 · 7 · ·

“He knew he’d have to sign a prenuptial; my family would never consent without all the financial matters settled on paper and signed. But he was tired of what little I’d give him, so he brought home that whore. Or maybe she’s Prench, or Finnish. I don’t know, and I don’t care anymore.”

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