Right. Okay. Well then. That was a thing... that I just read. At 2:20 in the morning.

Honestly didn't see the ending coming; good job. Also, you did surprisingly well at capturing/imitating Eyeswirl's style of writing.

6445047 Well, to tell the truth, Eyeswirl and I have a similar style of writing to begin with, If it's cutesy stuff. I'm glad you liked it!

“You're such a meanie,”

Such scathing words! I like the idea that Fluttershy can't bring herself to swear under most circumstances.

Also: alternate titles are fun.

It was good, though you may want to spell 'Tackle' right in the title

6445069 Woops! That was brought up previously, but I forgot about it

Phew! Getting hot in here...
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Goood dammit, I knew there was something fishy about the beginning being so sudden. XD And here I was hoping for story in a clop... Spinoff- okay, I know my logic was flawed. All jokes aside, I very much enjoyed this piece. The sudden beginning was a tad confusing at first, but after the end, I can see why it was set up that way. This also wasn't all that far off from Eyeswirl's own style, though there was still a distinct feel somehow. All in all, a nice little spinoff chapter. You have earned the Miss Matches seal of approval. Have some hearts. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

I like this.

One thing though, a missing word: "Was the touch of another truly better than a touch from one’s self?"

This was hilarious

Have yourself a cookie and some pony

That Was great one shot The ending got me but it was perfect I wasn't completely surprised at the ending, nicely done.

Fucking love you man/lady loved this story too!!

6486837 Man. My avatar has a
Glad you liked it!

Impressive. Most impressive.

6537742 Thank you very much

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Not a problem, it was hot, though I feel slightly annoyed yet amused at the It Was A Dream thing.

6537762 Well, I worked it that way for... reasons... that Eyeswirl and I discussed, but will likely not come to pass.

So many times my own alarm clock has done this to me.... why must you tease me so brain?

6539925 because alarm clocks are soulless automatons unlike clockwork beings, who have souls

Very well done. I can so totally see Fluttershy having a dream like this. And what a dream it was. I thought it was an interesting Freudian point that in her dream Fluttershy brought Adagio to a climax before herself, she really is considerate isn't she?

6595948 Glad you liked it

Also, well done on catching that! I was hoping people would pick up on the subliminal implications of Shy getting Dagi off first, and how it's symbolic of the way their relationship works.

Y'know, this would actually fit perfectly with what went down in Ch.29.

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You do realize that that was Eyeswirl's intention, right? Chapter 29 contained an allusion to this story. For which I am most grateful, I should say.

Oh my GOD..how adorable. I love this couple. Please write one more chapter with these two? Please?? Please???
*demon voice* PLEASE!!!

6919955 Not happening, sorry. I'd like to, but I'll have to get permission from Eyeswirl. In the meantime, you should totally check out my other clopfic. Give it some love. It needs it. But be gentle, it's still a little inexperienced.

6920096 Okay. :]

This is the best pairing ever

7530490 I do have to agree with you, friend. Were you brought here from Eyeswirl's story, or did you stumble across this by chance?

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I've read a good part of that story

7530758 Okay, just curious! You comment made me think the ship was new to you!

This was good. Very funny. You are a good writer.

I loved how you wrote it
I loved how well it fit
And i hated how it ended
But last one is just because I wanted more

7887403 Well, I do have another one based on SfaCF, if you're interested

And I'm glad you liked it! I'm a huge fan of Eyeswirl's work, so I put a lot of passion into it! I also plan on writing more of these later on, so you should check back now and again!

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Aww sweet
Ill make sure to look into it

Gyps, if you meant this one, yes, I have read it already, and it is simply amazing. The way that her dream had so many details, so many emotions, it really looked like it would be a real thing! But then... Goddamn alarm had to wake poor Fluttershy and her lucid, naughty, fluffy dreams with her fluff, Dagi. I actually have read this even before reading "Of Black Dresses and Gentle Caresses", and I must say, you did a amazing work!
I'll make sure I'll read your other fics too, don't worry, because you seem to be one of damn good writers. Perhaps I'll see if your other writings are as good as these ones I've read from you. Keep up the amazing work!
~Igor

yo, dat ending. biggest happy :O :D :O on my face :DDDD

I'm in the midst of the first third of the original story and this is pretty damn great

It was all a dream I used to read Word up magazine