Remembering, Mother

After a long day of work, Applejack mourns her parents' passing.

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Tavi4

Tavi4 #1 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Cracking story, old boy.

Marshall_Evergreen

Marshall_Evergreen #2 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Sweet and simple, just the way I like my short stories.

You really hit well on Applejack's character. I've always felt that she may keep herself too busy to ever truly remember.

I like it. Good story!

The Phantom Joker

The Phantom Joker #3 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Nicely done. Consider this story liked, faved, and followed!

IndiBrony

IndiBrony #4 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6433387 - Thank you! And thank you very much for subscribing!

6433538 - It was certainly the direction I wanted to take this. She's a good old work-horse, and when her parents are gone, it means more work to be doing on the farm. I've always envisioned an 'Applebuck Season' type of story happening around the time of her parents' death. That said, I never did quite figure out how I wanted to do it. It makes a lot of difference to a story depending how and when they both died. If they died together, at separate times etc.

6433623 Thank you for the love and I assume you mean following the story because I haven't got notification of you following my page, hah not that I'm pining for more subscribers or anything!

Revan

Revan #5 · Sep 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Excellent.

Need I say more?

IndiBrony

IndiBrony #6 · Sep 17th, 2015 · · ·

6433860 Well I do love constructive criticism on my stories; any nit picks or faults to be found are appreciated!

That said, I'm glad you like this story. By all means take a little look at my others as you may find more to your liking. For example, 'To Be A Wonderbolt' has a similarly sad theme to it and is one of my more popular shorts.

Not that I'm advertising my page on my page or anything... hah!