Dear Toby,
This is Spike the dragon. Twilight wanted me to respond to your last letter instead of apologizing to you outright. I guess it would only be fair to say sorry for getting angry at you and trying to scare you from sending your letters.
Twilight had me read through a few of them, and at least from what I read, you don’t sound like that bad of a guy. You also don’t looks that bad from your picture either.
I also read your last letter, and I’m a little confused about your calendar. Like, you don’t control the sun and the moon to make daytime and nighttime? What about seasons (and for that matter, the weather)? Do you at least control that, or is it like the Everfree Forest and it just works on its own?
I’m not as involved in these as Twilight is (obviously), but your world sounds really weird already. Maybe you can fill us in a bit more. I’ll read the rest of your letters and catch up, but yeah, I’d really like to know about that stuff.
From,
Spike
Well, this sounds like he put some real curiosity and emotion into this, so, umm... yay to Spike for not becoming a flankhole?
Ok real talk, I have, as of now have read your story ( which I do appreciate). I do appreciate frequent updates but what I want you to do is to stop frequent updates and make actual chapters. By what I'm saying is condense all your updates into a chapter. Don't get me wrong I enjoy what you're doing but constantly trying to look at my updates with (100 word) chapters it gets a little frustrating. don't get me wrong I enjoy what you're doing just condensed please.
9099441 I’ve also entertained the possibility of drafting a bunch of letters and then publishing them all at once daily (and I may very well try this soon). I just feel at this point, I should just keep the format I have.
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Actually it wouldn’t be ‘plothole’ but close enough I guess...
Hopefully Spike doesn't revert to being a 'big bad dragon.'
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Personally, I'm fine with separating the chapters as you've done; whenever stories based on letters crop up, this style is usually the most comfortable to read. I would definitely be up for taking all the 'chapters' you've written for a day and publishing them all at once; the emails tend to pile up (I'm alright with sorting through them). I'd rather have them all set off at once so I can just sort away, rather than have a few in the morning and some in the evening.
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oh spike you little rascle
Well, this resolved itself better than I expected.
I can just imagine spike looking at Tobys picture and going damn hes ugly, though he doesnt look like a villain.... Alright then.
XD
I mean of course he isnt ugly but you know overprotective brothers, every guy is ugly when it concerns their sister. *Rolls eyes* :P