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Watched a few episodes and those few turned to a few seasons, so now I'm here. So now I'm wondering what to write. I can also draw.
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Nice to see the sequel of the story.
Okay. I tried to read the story before this. I got through three chapters before I couldn't read through the grammar and spelling errors. There are groups on this site where you can get help. Please seek it out.
I find this story funny keep it up man
And the trouble just builds slowly.
great story really funny keep it going
Well that escalated quickly
Yay! You can't escape! Mwuhahahahahahaha.
Nice and that pic tho haha
My god, you people are fast
You might want to fix that you only have this "]" on there
6727264 oops, I missed one
6727268 lol, it's okeh
Man, that was one hell of a twist ending.
I call bullshit on that last part lol i could be wrong though
lol
And on a side note fucking cliffhangers
H̸̗̥͕͇̫o̴̙̗͚c̴͚̙̼͚ ͙̝̦͙̭̪c̜̫͙͘o̢̻̲m̢m̴o͕͉di̟̱͈̺s̰̟͚̙̻̦͍ ̥̺̹̪̻͙̣m͏̮e͓̰̘͚.̘̦̳̠̦̗
.̼̠͚͕̻͓̠.̻̮̹͍̜ͅ.̴͍̗̠̫̺̤͓I͙͍̫͉̳̗͞ͅ ̵c҉̭̰̪̩̬̠̼a̟͉̱͔̮ͅn͏̟̤̫͕n̜̣̰̗o̦̩͍̱̦͈̱t̞̰̣̠ ͢ev̫̺̳̦͠e̢ṇ̴̥͕̝ ̥̦̙͜fa̹̗͜ͅt̞h̥͍̪̳̫̜̩o̶̲͈̲̳̮̯m͙͜ ̭͓̩̭̳t͚̻ḫe̥̞̗̣͔ ̸͔ḭ̷̥͓͖̬̞ͅm̶̹̪̮̳p̸̥̠̖̹o̴͔͎s͟s͇i̛̞̤͙bi̮̼͇̱͝l̪̮͝i͉͙t̰̤y o͓̠̯̗f̡͇̣̟̥ ͈̝t͚h̞̲i̙̟̫͞s̷͎̩͇ ͍̟̞͘ͅp̩̼͟l̟o̢̺̝̘t̴̥̲̫͉̖͚̙. ̴̠̞̳͓̤ͅE̯̠̮x̠c͇͎͉̬̻͔̯͢e͓̙̼̝̰l͖̦̼l̥͕͞ͅe͓̘̫n͖̖̣͔̤t̻̜̻͖.͉̕ K̴͔e̠e͚̥͇͍̳͎p̧̟ ̻̮̬̻͖̪w̯̩̩̥̖̭͈r̪̥͞i̵̬̤͇̫t̝̮i̳̳̻ͅn̰͇̯͉̼͟g͚̻͕͚̱.̨̰̘ ͇͕̥͈̥Y̻̦̩͙̘̭̬o͍͈̕ṵ̠̜͎̯̳r̭̙͈͚̹̦ ̼̝̭̺̞̀ͅG̭̩̗̞͟o͈d͝ ̷͈͍̻i̹͈̬͕̥̻͍s͉̲̝̟͈̲̣ ͕͕p̘͎̥͉͓̮̘͠le͏̥̥̰͖̭̞͖a̜͢s̢̻̹̤e͔̭̰̜̪ͅd.͔͍̹͚
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*edit* Good you fixed it.
Well he's dead my he rest in peace
May a flight of Pegasi sing thee to thy rest
is this story dead?
is dis ded?
Pls update
Needs updates
Welcom back.
Talk about blast from the past. Welcome back and thanks for the update.
I loved this I honestly thought it was dead glad it's not worth the ait heh keep it up
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sorry forgot the comm meant it to read as glad it's not, worth the wait
tl;dr Silent/Oct Relationship advanced to mate, hidden mares starting to go into heat, unexpected partycrasher.
Poor Silent, can't catch a break.
this was a cool chapter, it really shows how screwed he is and in a hilarious way, I cant wait to see how he gets out of this.
I was waiting for her to beat the crap out of them.
Aww I wanted to see spitfire besting the crap out of him before getting what she wanted D: XD
Beating*. I blame autocorrect
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She probably still did anyways.
Illegal entry, massacre, attempted murder, etc.. how has she not been sent to the tartar yet?.. Although.. it is still ahead...
Unless its unknown corruption.. which does not exempt from liability...
p.s. - drubbing him in order to bring him to his senses is something new ... at least the helmet protected the second important part of his body..
'All the Stall-ions are bucked in Equest-ria! All Stall-ions are bucked in Equest-ria! All the mares buck them Dry! All the mare Buck them dryyyyyyyy!'
My poor attempt at a song...oh well.
The ending of this chapter made me LOL. How did Vinyl get stuck in the ceiling by her horn again?
would getting a human hand attachment make up for what happened to him?
At least those mares kinda got what they wanted so now they can kinda leave him alone right?
Interesting
Wow
multiple choice as to why Luna is crying
1. thrilled to see a male lunar pegasus
2. resembles a foal she had in the past
3. reincarnation of a lover she had in the past
4. pinkie pie placed some onions near her
5. some other reason related to that adventure tag
Damn, how could I have missed that update for almost a week now....
This one is now on the favorite list and will be patiently waiting for the next chapter!
I like the story but for me personally there is too much sex.
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Glad you like the story. I'm not planning on writing much more sex scenes after this story.
Last Words, is Todoly Worth!
well looks like you in fact don't get a say, mares rule this world. well at least you got the last word at the end.
Or replace “at” with “and become”.