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Watched a few episodes and those few turned to a few seasons, so now I'm here. So now I'm wondering what to write. I can also draw.

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This story is a sequel to Falling to my end


Silent Night, a human turned pony who fell from the sky. He just wants a quiet life, but its anything but that. Having an obsessive stalker and an entire clan of ponies after him are a few examples. Getting rendered unconscious often doesn't make things better.

After the events of the last story Silent hoped his life would be uneventful here on out, but no, fate had other plans. After becoming Twilight's guard by Princess Luna due to his resemblance to her son long ago. He soon finds out why by being reverted into a foal and being dropped into the past... on his face.

Now he must live in this different time as, Lunar, the son of Luna. Will he find a way back to his own time or will he meet his end? Having dreams of dying isn't helping either. All he does know is that he will find out why Lunar disappeared. Until then, maybe he can make some friends on the way.


Death tag for implied deaths

Cover art by me.
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Oh man, I bet Octavia and Vinyl aren't happy to lose their stallion this way.

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I know right let's how he doesn't lose his memories and I bet he is GOING to be lunar, Luna's son her adopted son ha ha ha

you think presnt luna is going to be mad that starlight pretty much killed her son and octavia got her guy killed by starlight... i dont think starlight will be alive for when he gets back. i also hope that the mares of that village get what they deserve after all those children are grandchildren to the princesses and if luna finds out what happend to her son then both starlight and those mares could be in troble

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Well let's see.
Breaking and entering.
Theft.
Use of magic that I'd expect to be forbidden.
Recklessly tampering with the timeline for stupid reasons (forgiven in the show, but End could change that), possibly one of the reasons NMM came to be.
Kidnapping.
Abusing magic.
Reckless endangerment (left a stallion turned foal that's barely able to speak alone in the forest at night)/ attempted murder of a Royal Guard/ attempted Regicide.
High Treason.

Pretty sure that's most of Starlight's crimes. As for the other mares?
Kidnapping.
Stalking.
Harassment/ sexual harassment.
Rape.

As for Luna? Probably the only ones she'll acknowledge as her grandchildren will be Tavi and Vinyl's, I can't remember if he did it with Spitfire, though she would probably have assault/ battery and stalking at least.

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it will be silent who is the pivotel point with all of these as with the mares if he pushes the fact that being brought up in a community like that would be bad for them he might be able to get luna to help him get his kids for himself as leaving them with the mares is asking for worse troble later. as for starlights crimes its unlikly she will get waya with them now as in the show twilight was able to fix it all and as princess she can pardon her but with luna's son addid to that luna isnt going to let that happen most likly.

I'm getting the feeling that this event caused a time paradox which altered time. That's why in present time Luna sees him as her son, and explains why his speech is the same. Their both really the same guy. This is my theory anyway.

I started and finished the first and second stories today! I must have a lot of free time. Anyways, I have become addicted to this series. I hope to enjoy more in the future.

Go Beyond! PLUS ULTRA!

What happened next is a mystery.(——

Knew it.(——

“Silent, I’m pregnant.“(——

But in all seriousness, I didn’t have a preference in gender for my a foal.

Either my or a not both.

I’m sure Twilight has a spell set up to prevent teleportation by intruders.

The scene shifts again and I’m in the library.

Thinking that there is nothing to see I then hear somepony giving an ominous chuckle.

“Or it’s totally true!”

“Let’s see how well you are without your fancy armor.”

She throws me with such force that I can’t comprehend whats going on. I try to use my wings to slow down, but they do nothing. I can only hope where ever I land that it’s soft. My vision goes white, which is a nice change, but then I feel the hard ground. The pain is unusually great that I want to cry. I feel the dirt buried deep in my nostrils so that I need to breathe from my mouth.

I open my eyes. The world is blurry, but I can just make up the sun rising slowly. I try to get up, but the pain stops me from doing so. I feel myself starting to cry. Why do I want somepony to cradle me all of a sudden? I soon start to pass out from the pain.

The last thing I see is a dark blue figure walking towards me.

He’s fallen through time. I can’t help but post this.
4:07

I’ve read the past stories to this one and found myself chuckling at times. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Should I be worried? Because who knows who could find it. But for now, I should be glad it's gone.

Great chapter.

That Celestia of that time ws a real jerk, always dismissiv about her sister no matter what.

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Probably the reason why Nightmare Moon existed in the first place.

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Yeah, that is exactly my thought. :twilightsmile:

Good,

Thanks for the longer chapter

good chapter.

Thank you for the update *Sips Tea* It was quite enjoyable and cute

I look up at the windows and notice the light coming through them.

Luna got off her throne and started making her way towards me and for some reason I wanted her to.

“How can I not be ready?” Luna scoffs. “We shall prove it,” she told herself.(——

There, stood a crib, it had a night theme to it. It had the moon and stars on it. The little figures hanging at the top were little night guards too, modeled after her actual guards.

“I shall not give up, Lunar.(——”

'Lunar. Yes. That shall be his name.' Luna thought to herself.(——

It isn’t a maid one, that’s for sure, so it must be some worker outfit.

“WWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH,(——” I start to cry in pain.

Having Silver Dusk and Gray Mist was already bad enough alone. Those mares ruined my life.

It was getting us nowhere, so without hesitating I took it upon myself to take it home.

But seeing as I tend to wake up without knowing what happened exactly,

I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter. I read the last two stories and so far, I'm liking this one.

the paradox has truely taken effect

Oh my, a stable time loop. *Sips Tea* Quite interesting

Yep, called it a few chapters ago. Time paradox. Gotta say too, this chapter makes me hate celestia in this AU even more.

I make most of it it and fall back asleep.

“I present to thee all, my son, Lunar Night, prince of the night!!!”

It is always enjoyable to see this update. *Sips Tea* The look at Luna learning how to parent is quite enjoyable.

If you don't get knocked out, you get crushed in your head. I don't know if that's how it is, that's how it is to me.
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Can I have some tea?

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Of course. Any preferences on type?

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Nah. I never rly drink tea.

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Hmm, then might I advice Tibetan Butter Tea? It may taste a bit odd at first but it does wonders for warming one up and for giving a nice burst of energy.

Very popular with those who climb high mountains.

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dont be too quick to lable it such for all we know the hits to the head were fate trying to make him loose his memorys and now that he is with them he might change things. i hope he does change things like luna going nightmare moon

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Ah, but that assumes he DIDN'T know in the previous iteration. I find it more likely he knew and thus no what he is doing is exactly as expected...

But there is also another theory. I cannot remember the name of it but it is that time resists change *Sips Tea*.

The more you try to change events the more the events push back and resist it. An example would be going back in time to kill someone. The more you tried the more things could conspire and push back (Gun jams as you fire it, poison in food is thrown away due to sudden lack of appetite, bomb just doesn't go off, flight you plan to hijack is delayed, etc)

If that is the case the more he would try to escape the key events here the more little coincidences would force him back on the established path. *Sips Tea*

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there is also his luck which seems to have him going down paths he doesnt want so luck wise if he tryes preserve the timeline it is likly he will break from what happend

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I like to think the timeline either accounts for his luck or his "Luck" is the timeline maintaining it's stable loop.

Reminds me of my first night at the orphanage.

“Princess? I have brought Fresh warm milk for the colt. Shall I leave it here?”

How convenient.

So they made sure my food was safe for me to eat without a problem.

She knew Starswirl would make them make up,

Then the entire place shakes and whatever is holding me presses down on me even more.

It’s only when I dream that I remember.

The stranger, who I can’t see their face,(—— walks over to the beam.

but all they needed was that one kick and the slab of concrete falls.(——

Thanks for the chapter pal...

She's the filly from the orphanage, isn't she?

Oh this will be cute indeed.... Or amusing. *Sips Tea* As always I greatly enjoy seeing this update

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Originally thought to ask if she was the vampire, but I didn't.

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untill conferend otherwise the filly that drank blood and got stronger faster seemingly because of it shall be assumed to be vampire

Oh god no. RUN LUNAR RUN!

Okay, where is the balcony? There it is! Now, if it’s there, then my room should be… here?

As if I needed to do this, or else something might go wrong.

“Princess Luna!(——” A guard came up to Luna. He bowed before speaking again. “The recruits have arrived.”

there would be a guard hidden somewhere.

Her wings spread out, and with one push of her hind legs, she travels the distance within a second.

I bet it’s the filly from the orphanage.

I've enjoyed reading this and previous stories before this.
Please keep making more chapters.
I can't wait for the chapter.! :)

It says it updated but there doesn't seem to be a new chapter *Sips Tea* Could someone tell me what happened?

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isn't quite ready yet. I hit publish by mistake. Sorry.

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No worries *Sips Tea* I just was not sure what was going on

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