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The Loner
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Is this setting still in WW2, or in Modern Times in the 21 Century?
10783905
it is still in ww2 yes, hence the dates. What needs to be corrected?
They are SUPER NAIVE! They will regret underestimating Adolf Hitler, and his Nazi Party/Nazi Germany . And when WW2 finally happened. They will definitely regret it, and be horrific on Hitler's crudely against the world, and the poor Jews.
10783926
You said "modern warfare"? So, I thought we will time skip to the 21 century?
10783931
oh, lol my bad. there ya go, all fixed :)
10783933
So, this is a WW2 Story? Cool! Just wait to see the tramitazed looks on the Ponies faces when they see what the Axis Powers ( Nazi Germany, Fascist Italy, and Imperial Japan. ), ( And sometimes Stalin and the Soviet Union) have done in WW2.
Plus, they should learn that our Race is Humanity, not exactly called "People".
10783940
I know, it is all in the plan. There is a shit ton of...well...historical shit that I need to figure out and fit into the story as I go. I changed the description a tad so it matches the story better.
10783952
Well, Oversimplified or the YouTube Search for WW2 Explained link could help?
https://m.youtube.com/results?sp=mAEA&search_query=Ww2+explained
10784060
Yeah, it took me a long while to finally figure a place to start it. Is anything missing from the story that could help it improve?
Actually, it's west, east is Scandinavia or Germany ...
Oof, bet it was a pain to memorize the events. You going to have your hands full or your a history fanatic with no issues writing this story.
mmm, interesting...
Some people just want to watch the innocent burn.
10784361
Yeah! It's f***** up! And I bet that some of the Ponies want to have a long talk with Hitler or Stalin themselves for their evil crimes!
Also, who keeps giving out dislikes??!!
10784068
I was going off of a 1936 image on yahoo, my bad though. It's corrected.
10784101
I look things up as I go and fill in details before I publish. There is most likely a troll that is doing the dislikes, they just want attention and to read stories that have nothing but rainbows and sprinkles. Oh and of course unicorns that fart rainbows.
10784686
Whatever you say, edgelord.
10784686
Gotta have rainbow farts, very important.
ironically, had the post ww1 naval treaties not stopped japan from building ships for a while, they would probably have had a large economic collapse and not been able to build the navy they did. as it was if you wanted to show ponies the worst naval engagements of ww2, the guadalcanal campaign was where the naval war was won and lost
10784871
Not really, Japan lost the naval war the minute the first bomb dropped.
-US naval yards are mostly east coast
-No practical way to invade mainland US
-US Industry while not unlimited is not something Japan can compete with.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l9ag2x3CS9M is a good visual of why any single battle in the pacific only delayed/speed up the inevitable conclusion.
The war was also not just US V japan. The UK and Australians were also involved
10785063
japan had the 2nd or 3rd largest fleet in the world and geographically the smallest area to secure. the us navy meanwhile was at reduced strength in the pacific for years as they had to divide resources between the european theater and disperse them across the pacific, it was not a foregone conclusion that japan could have locked the US out of much of their gains simply by taking, fortifying, and making it too expensive for the USN to take any territory back, now japan had other problems like a fierce split between army and navy branches, as well as abysmal convoy logistics, but their navy wasn't dead the minute they attacked pearl harbor. their plans never seriously included an invasion of the US to begin with, it was all about building a japanese empire in south east asia
as for british and Australian naval assets, well Australia had like 7 cruisers of various classes, a sea plane tender, and a few destroyers, nothing really that scared the japanese, and the Royal navy's own ships were pushed out of the region mostly by japan taking their ports, and a lot of ships were also transferred out of the region before 1941 to defend britain. oh and they lost their only pacific fleet carrier in 1941
yes japan would eventually loose, but only in a numbers game, its still up to the admirals and generals to make that a reality, fortunately the US had some of the best admirals and generals in the war with the likes of King, Halzey, Nimits, Lee, ect ect
what I was pointing out though was that the cost of building such a large navy was crippling japan in the interwar period, but by pausing ship building during the late 20s and early 30s they recovered enough to get it into their heads to try and take on the entire pacific, whereas maybe had they not stopped shipbuilding, they would have entered the 40s totally financially ruined and unable to actually start any war
You all are going to bust a gut when you see one of the minor characters' name in the next chapter.
SORRY ALL, QUICKLY REFRESH IF YOU ARE CURRENTLY READING IT NOW (10:38 p.M Central), there is a crucial minor detail regarding how one of the minor characters looks.
Unoriginal forced loss of innocence is unoriginal.
10790102
Ok. So next week, the next chapter comes up?
10790137
Lmao, totally didn't plan to finish it exactly a week later. It just depends how my RL schedule is, may be in three days or could be two weeks.
Please tell me that they close the portal???!!!
10790143
Hope it comes out soon. Because, I like to have the Mane Six found out the truth. Or the entirety of Equestria actually, and finally learn about the another world of Planet Earth with Humanity. But it's at another world war wth each other.
Or that they will FINALLY learn that we are called "Humans". And learn a horrible realization that Both WW1 and WW2 AREN'T the only Wars on Planet Earth. We sadly have a VERY nasty habit of fighting each other. That we even have over a Hundred Wars back-to-back, between our Thousands Years of History.
But, Both WW1 and WW2 are the more bloodiest and deadly, so far.
10790146
with how celestia ususaly does things its unlikely
10790371
Welp, then they are totally screwed!!!!!! Because, Hitler ( Or Stalin) would no doubt like to have another world to rule ( Equestria). Or use the Ponies and other MLP Creatures as "Loyal" ( Forced them to be ) Soldiers, Labor, etc..
Pretty sure he does have one of those (yet) ...
10790146
Depends on how far behind them he becomes, it's on a 3 hour auto-shutdown ...
10790628
Seriously?! Three FRICKIN Hours??!! I thought that the portal would hold a little while, so it will give those two Ponies time to make a run for it to the portal. BUT, since the Two-Pony Team: "Grey Team" already went though the portal already, BUT the portal is still left on for some reason??!! For the entirely of the Three Hour Limit??!!
What kind of a Reckless IDIOT created that type of a Portal Spell, that leaves a portal OUT IN THE OPEN!!!!! And could give the hostile enemy ( Nazi Germany) a chance to find it, and discover the ponies, other MLP Races, and a NEW world to conquer. IF that Nazi SS Officer finds that portal, and starts killing innocent ponies ( Just because their not human, nor being Nazi Germany's "Master Race" candidates).
That will be Celestia's own F******* fault for creating that STUPID Dimensional Portal Spell, that lasts for a long time, even when the pony teams already went though it, BUT it's still left open. Long enough for Nazi Germany to invaded their dumbasses.
I think this should be addressed in the next chapter. That Celestia is HEAVILY Scolded to have created that dumb spell in the first place. Thus, unintentionally letting a Nazi SS Officer of all people, in Equestria. And that the blood of her innocent "little ponies" is on HER hooves, by leaving the dimensional portal on for Three Hours!!!!!!!!!!!
It's NOT "Team Grey's" ( Dork Fish and Big Dip's ) fault! Because, they haven't created that type of spell in the first place. Celestia DID!!! So, this is most definitely her fault for letting a Nazi SS Officer to slaughter her "precious" Ponies.
Hope the Author ( The Loner ) reads this as well.
10790628
oops lmfao
10790838
Believe me, there will be hell to pay if that SS officer finds the portal.
10791087
For who? Celestia being blamed? Or karmic punishment for the Nazi SS Officer himself?
10791089
Wait and see, wait and you will see.
10791113
Okay. I just think that Celestia should still be blamed. I mean, leaving a portal for THREE HOURS is a very, VERY high risk. And will obviously expose your Equestrian World to the wrong people ( Like Nazi Germany ).
It makes sense IF you have closed the portal STRAIGHT AWAY. Like all the other Normal Dimensional Portals have should in media. Like Doctor Strange closing his portals right after he went though them.
It would been better if Celestia could had shorten the time limit for the portal being left open for only 1 Hour, or 30 Minutes. Heck, the Ponies will be very lucky if it was only 5 Minutes, or 10-15 Minutes could be reasonable as well. But, over Three Hours?! That will obviously lead to disaster!
10791123
Hmmm, you know that the mirror portal (ESQ/Sunset Shimmer) is a three day auto-close with a 30 moon down time til Twilight made whenever needed (but no auto-close, manual) ...
10791543
Well, this is different. We are in a middle of a WAR! And leaving a portal to your world, thus allowing very bad people ( Nazi Germany) to come to your poor innocent world is a VERY POOR decision on Celestia's part. This is WHY I'm making a very big deal out of it.
At least in the Equestria Girls Movie. The Threat of Bully Sunset Shimmer isn't so bad or anything. She DOESN'T have tons of Guns, a hostile Army, Tanks, Planes, Motorcycles, Ships, and Submarines of a Fascist Nation like Nazi Germany does!!!!!!
10791565
Just thought of something, since we don't know all the particulars of the spell, the three hour window might be the smallest it can be (due to power requirements to open them in the first place) ... Also, we don't know what it looks like on the other side (yet, thinking EQG) ...
10791911
What do you mean on the other side? It just shows the Original Pony World, and our human world during WW2 ( 1939-1945 ).
10791952
Think about EQG, it's a stone arch and it doesn't look different until used (and thinking about going through it isn't going to be the first thing to think of either), plus that's if the nearby ground shows the hoofprints leading to it ...
Now Spring Break had its portal under a layer of sand, again the first thought is not going to be someone went through it ...
10792964
I don't know if the author wants to reference the Equestria Girls Spin-off Series with the Portals. But, we are in the far past ( WW2 Era/Very Late 1930's to Early/Mid 1940's. ) than the modern 21 Century of Equestria Girls. And we haven't even seen or know where Sunset is, right about now. Hope the Author could answer both our questions.
10792964
what are you talking about? What stone arch, you mean the statue?
10792980
As for Sunset Shimmer, I haven't decided if I am going to bring her in to play yet.
10793055
Okay.
10793054
Yep, one arch on the base of the statue ...
10793319
I have searched the second chapter, but I can't find what it is you are talking about. Are you talking about the portal in Equestria Girls?
10794095
Ahhhm yes, talking about the EQG end-portal (you haven't shown us the human side-portal [or even the pony side]) ...
Was pointing out that there's a also finding that portal if it's not that noticeable (hoof prints in front of it) ...