Watched a few episodes and those few turned to a few seasons, so now I'm here. So now I'm wondering what to write. I can also draw.
A human goes to sleep and wakes up in a pony's body and is falling from the sky. His adventure in a land full of color ponies has only just begun. But first, he must overcome a great challenge...talking to strangers.
As soon as he lands.
The cover art is mine.
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i have no idea what to think about this story hmmmm i'll track it
Just can't get a break can he?
by the gods man reread your own story out loud to find any of the more obvious typos. that aside it doesnt seem like a bad concept so far
you haz follow for meow
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Thanks for the notice
A Ninja Pegasis I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm guessing this is your OC character ?
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Yup
5903510 I hope next chapter comes soon. Does he got more shy? Or in this case get more anti-social?
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You'll see
would you like some one to edits this for you good story just needs a lot of touch ups.
5907263 yeah, I figured
Honestly, I'm also terrible with grammar ect. but when a different character speaks turn it into a seperate paragraph, it's become a little difficult. But still, a good first few. Good luck wrighting!
Ninjas!!!!!!!!
*clears throat*
Yay a chapter!
That picture though makes me laugh because it looks like your OC is bored as hell and angry at the same time
Lol I like how twilight just referred his actions as "the ninja thing" when its her who isn't paying attention. Good job on this one although I wish it was a bit longer, looking forward to the next chapter
5931148 I'll try to make the next one longer
...meh...you haz get like
HE'S CLEARLY A SUPER-SECRET-NINJA-SPY THAT'S WORKING FOR QUEEN CHRYSALIS!
Good chapter, I'm surprised none of them have noticed what they're doing.
still gutt
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HEY!!! That's specist. Oh, just because their black you assume their up to no good. You gonna ignore any white Changelings, assuming they are disguised as law abiding citizen? For shame sir, for shame.
Oh, run-on sentences. We meet again my Nemesis.
I now have a reasonable understanding as to why this story has one dislike to every three likes. I mean come on! The amount of grammatical errors found in this fic gave the more logical/OCD part of me a seizure. I'm not entirely saying that this fic suck. I just hope a majority of the errors ate fixed. Can't continue part the first chapter.everything else makes me cringe.
Yeah, you really need an editor.
Mahboi. It's 'rhyme' just to let you know.
I find it humorous that silent was kidnaped by a bunch of mars that want to breed him and a mare that loves dirty talk.
That filly is pure diabeetus.
...(aka great chapter)... (No I will not translate the randomness that is that sentence)... (No)... (...) touché
Its telepathic not telekinetic
Telepathic: Supposedly capable of transmitting thoughts to other people and of knowing their thoughts; psychic.
Telekinesis: The supposed inducement of movement of an object by mental or spiritual power.
O'Man Twilights pissed and she got a can full of rage with her.
Can't wait till the next chapter! Keep up the nice work.
damn, that filly is one helluva troll
Silent: What if I wasn't born?
GODAMNIT PINKIE!
Nice chapter.
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Why is it that Twilight is always so fricking paranoid in these fan fictions?!?!?!
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Haha nice one there using something from the show, and it would add seance to the bugbear.
Some one play "falling towards the sky" from rvb when reading this chapter.
Do you want to listen how it lead up to meeting the wolfs and how we got away? Nah you probably don't want to listen to that.
*sees colt picture* O3O
6105726 THIS IS THE SONG OF MY PEOPLE!!!
[Laughing intensifies]
ok. let's be serious. This was awesomeli funny. If that is a word
(thinking of an image to use)
uh...I got none. have walrus shouting "OMG OMG OMG OMG"
eh...
couldn't find it...
have this:
NO??? fuck you fimfiction, FUCK YOU.
Damn! He's getting all the ladies
It's raining ladies!
I have a feeling in the end it will end up in a massive orgy...with piles of mares left in its wake like in the other story about an overdude...
6215077 It's raining mares! Hallelujah! It rainin mares!
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which one of you swords looks cooler?
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This, I guess?
6224507 Don't know
6224550 the hilt looks like a lightsaber hilt, 10/10