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You, uh... You got issues, bro.
6288458
What are my issues, exactly?
6288460 I think you might want to talk to a professional about that one.
6288464
About what? What do I need to talk to a professional about?
6288464
You are being extremely rude, and I would appreciate it if you didn't insult me like that. I would also appreciate it if you would tell me what my so called "Issues" are.
6288498 Your prose is bland as anything, the the character motivation is stupid to the point of being physically painful ("Nothing like a rape baby to teach someone responsibility and make sure they do all the farm work they're supposed to!"), and this is an extremely fucked up thing to write about, which makes you look like either an extremely disturbed person who should probably be kept tabs on to make sure they don't start telling folk to put the lotion in the basket before they get the hose again or someone trying to be >Le edgy as fuck. Either way, it's the sort of thing you might want to seek professional help over.
Why did you write this? There's no reason whatsoever that a story like this should exist. Honestly, you should be disgusted with yourself. The reason doesn't matter. Even if it was a request, can you seriously just not say "No, that's crossing a line. I'm not going to write a fucking incestuous rape story."? Honestly, man. You should take this down. And have some standards when it comes to requests. Seriously.
6288558 Goos sir leave him alone. There are 100 stories like this go pick on them! You need to keep hurtful things to yourself!
6288530 I would just like to point out a few issues with your statement, because I am assuming you were unaware of the Author's Note (i.e. the statement about not liking incest, and that whole thing.) at the end of the first chapter, and I choose not to believe you are being a belligerent asshole. My first issue with your statement is fairly simple, I do not think you are quite qualified to say someone has issues, if you have a PhD and knowledge of the human psyche then I retract that argument. Running under the assumption you do not have these, it may interest you that many psychiatrists say that writing is actually a good way to vent, and help with mental issues. Another issue I have with you saying that the author has issues is simple. You chose to read this. The author stated that he/she did not really want to write this, that it was requested, you however cannot say the same. You read this of your own freewill. I read this of my own free will. I do not have issues. I can assume you don't think you have issues. Frankly, claiming that someone has issues because they wrote something you are not a fan of makes you seem like a jackass. To help put that in perspective, I am not a fan of Taylor Swift's work, I find her boring and rather bland. If I accuse her of having issues because she released a song talking about kittens, then I do not contribute any meaningful statement to anything. In fact I appear to be a jackass.
I looked at your profile and I saw that you have written stories. I don't know the content, and I don't care, but what I do know is that you have written something. Would you feel compelled to continue writing if you had comments saying what you have said to the author of this? Please be considerate, saying that someone has issues doesn't help them in anyway. I am sorry that this comment has gotten so long, but it is early and I felt that this needed to be said.
6288558 I don't think much of the above applies to you. You just seem to be a dick. The only real thing I have to say to you on the matter is, if you have an issue then tell the author what they can improve, don't just tell them that what they wrote is terrible and they should feel bad. Regarding the fact that this was a request, I actually applaud the author for writing something he/she clearly had no real interest in. That is what we call trying new things. Your comment is what we call a waste of resources and of human intelligence.
Author, if you have read this all, then I would just like to tell you to ignore the assholes/ignorant comments, and focus instead on the ones that tell you what you can improve, I have read none of your other work, but I am interested in seeing what you can write.
As a final note, this and the part regarding Captain Joker, were edited in after the initial posting of my comment, I hadn't noticed the comment before.
Thank you all, and may you walk in peace.
6288530
Yeah, there's totally not a thousand other incest rape stories on the site, or thousands of non-rape incest fetish clopfics. Nope. It's this author in particular who's messed up.
Is this a good story, or at least, particularly arousing? No, but by skipping the actual criticism - which is only briefly touched upon, isn't examined in any detail, and occurs only after you get called out - in favour of personal attacks, your comments here are (as per usual, when I see you at all) crossing the line.
What do you gain by this?
There's at least for or five times where you wrote, "trust" instead of "thrust". You may want to fix that.
6290549
Oh.... Thank you, I'll fix that as soon as I can.
6288558
Unless you want to get off to a rape fic. In which case, it has a reason.
I will agree only to the point of not writing something you're uncomfortable with.
Knock that shit off right now. You don't like the subject, fine. But don't you ever tell people to take their story down just because you don't like the subject matter. You know, I've criticized a lot of stories, I've been an asshole quite a few times to authors when critiquing their work. A few times I told an author to delete their work because the quality was so horrifyingly bad or the spelling and pacing was atrocious that the only way to save the story was to start from scratch. But never once have I ever told an author to take their stuff down simply because I had issues with the content or subject matter.
6288530 Really? I mean, really? The author stated this was requested for him/her to write, even said he/she has no interest in this sort of thing. I think your the one with issues.You saw the tags, you saw the description. And you still read it. You need help if your just going to throw insults with, really, nothing to back them up.
On a side note, although it's not my cup of tea it was pretty well written. Nice work. 2/5 mustaches.
Eh. Your prose is exceptionally bleak... you'd make a good author of urban depression stories. But of clopfics? Try and spice your writing up a bit.
I understand you dislike incest, and I liked the story... It just had more potential, y'know? Anyways, is just my two cents.
6288558 So you want this story taken down for moral reasons... okay. I'll accept that argument. But first, tell me who's the victim.
Is a real life person getting raped? No.
Is this incentivizing the readers to go out and commit rape? No, it's not.
It's just text on a page. Applejack and Big Macintosh aren't even real people who are having their reputations ruined by this story.
6295103 You've got a point, I suppose. And I will concede that asking him to take it down was perhaps taking it a step too far. It's a personal thing. I know people who have been raped, and that shit leaves emotional scarring that sticks with people, sometimes for the rest of their lives. So while I do agree that nobody is being harmed, and that I shouldn't have demanded he take it down, I still think this story is really fucked up. That being said, my previous comment was a definite overreaction. My apologies to the author.
(By the way, I would suggest adding a rape warning to the description.)
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6288558
Let me just say one thing and be clear about it...
This is the Author's story and page.
The Author post whatever he wants to.
Therefore if you don't like it, I bet the Author doesn't give a crap
6360072 Yes, but when they post it on a public site in a public area for public approval, that argument doesn't work. If people were logging into whatever diaper-furry website you two normally go on and starting shit, then you might have a point.
My favorite part about this fic?
I'm pretty certain everybody will understand why.
6360944
So what you're saying is that you don't like clopfics, rape or sibling bandage. Because if that is the case I guess three or more fandoms as a whole will have to delete their stories. I'm talkin about three thousand plus people deleting their work
6361346 Ah, logical fallacies. Will you ever not be funny?
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I don't know.
6360944 there are thousands of these types of stories on this site if you don't like them don't read them but don't go talking shit about them because you don't like them that is just stupid
Sequel?
6485769
What do you mean? Would you elaborate please?
6487606 I really like the story and it'd be cool if you continued it (you don't have to, but it would be cool)
6487615
Well, yes. I understand that. But what do you think the sequel would be about? If I were to write it?
6487648
Oh i don't know, maybe Applejack finds out who the dad is and how she responds to that. Also how Big Mac reacts to her being pregnant and what Applejack says to him when she finds out.