"Eternal chaos comes with chocolate rain, you guys. CHOCOLATE RAIN!!!!" I don't know about any of you, but I'm rooting for eternal chaos. GO DISCORD!!
Page generated in 0.097 seconds
Total duration
612 users online
884,762 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Interesting, are you sure this is your first time? Because, it seems very detailed for a first clopfic (not in a bad way!) To sum up, good job! 6/10. Have a good day!
Well I for one think that you've done a good job. Granted, I don't read many clopfics, but I can clearly see that you've put a great amount of effort into it; plus, I know a good story when I see one.
Although it was tiny bit rushed for my liking, I still enjoyed it. I can see that you made it better by developing Pinkie/Pinkamena and Cheese character's.
Well done on your first clopfic. Here, have a cookie! *tosses you a cookie*
I'm very impressed. For a first timer you did that very good. Here, have a banana.
6136536
6136671
6136715
Thank you all so much. I was honestly really nervous about posting this, but I'm really glad you all liked it.
That was wonderful!
6137378
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow
6136871
I'm gonna suggest you to my friends on Fim Fiction because you're the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was great I liked the psrt where he "put her in her place" earlier in. It could be nice to give more build up.
6139361
Awww, thank you so much. I really appreciate that.
>>Pinkam3naDian3Pi3
You're welcome!!!!!!
There is one error but either way it was a good read
6136715 why a banana and not a kiwi or a apple
6143465
Cause reasons
Very nice for a first time. Very very very good. Now of you'll excuse me I need to go take care of something. I have to do the dishes. What were you thinking!?
it's great!!
7885723
I don't remember, I wrote this a long time ago. I think she was supposed to just be in her underwear but I might have forgotten to add that. I don't know. Sorry.
7886054
Thanks. And I honestly don't even remember writing that part I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
Lucky Pinkie ⛓ I'm kind of jealous of her