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Malice In Wonderland


"Eternal chaos comes with chocolate rain, you guys. CHOCOLATE RAIN!!!!" I don't know about any of you, but I'm rooting for eternal chaos. GO DISCORD!!

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Rainbow Dash has always been the toughest pegasus in all of Ponyville. But when she moved to Cloudsdale to become a Wonderbolt, things changed. Rainbow Dash always loved flying and doing her tricks and flips and leisurely practicing in hopes that she would one day be able to join the Wonderbolts.

When that day finally came, Rainbow Dash wasn’t prepared for the hours of nonstop practice. She hadn’t conditioned her body to work that hard for that long. She was weak and slow compared to the other Wonderbolts. What will come of that?

During her struggles training with the Wonderbolts, she finds somepony who helps her endure the long days and tough practices

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

Seems like an interesting SoarinDash story, can’t wait to read more of it.

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: I can’t wait to write more of it.

Ooh! Is it soarin?! Is it soarin?!
I'm soo excited!!:rainbowkiss:

Ooh! I knew it! I knew it!!:yay:
I loooooove this story!
You are a great writer!
Here! Have a follow!:pinkiehappy:
Ooh! And a fave!:heart:
And a like! :pinkiehappy:
What else can I give you that is good?
Uh......

HAVE THIS COMMENT!:heart:

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Thank you! :pinkiehappy: you are so great and I'm so glad you like it.

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Like it?....
Like it?...
LIKE IT?
LIKE IT?!





























I LOVE IT!!:heart:

Love it. Love it!! :heart::heart: This is getting really good, especially very daring to.:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2: All she needs is some rest and to build up her strength to, and I wonder when will soarin tell her he likes Her? :raritystarry:or rainbow tell him she likes him? :pinkiehappy:Well good luck on the next chapters my friend. :raritywink::raritywink:

Those wonder bolts that didn't help rd should not be a wonder bolt:rainbowdetermined2:

:pinkiehappy::heart: this is getting so good need more:pinkiehappy:

Some of them thought it was an ACT!? :twilightangry2:

Okay, seriously, NOT COOL! We all know Dash is a prankster but you NEVER assume a teammate is faking in that sort of situation.

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Sorry.... It was just for part of the story.... Please don't be mad.....

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Nothing to apologize for. It's a GREAT story. I know that because it brings out a lot of emotion, and any story that can do that is always a story worth reading.

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Oh yay! So that was a positive comment :twilightsheepish: I knew that.... Thank you.

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