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Malice In Wonderland
"Eternal chaos comes with chocolate rain, you guys. CHOCOLATE RAIN!!!!" I don't know about any of you, but I'm rooting for eternal chaos. GO DISCORD!!
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Damn. All I can say, is damn.
*sigh* this makes me sad
No...
Um. . .I don't know what to say; I'm not sure I'm OK with this idea.
I liked this, I really enjoy reading stories like these and it was an interesting take on the subject, only problem is the way you described somethings, for example
Chilling, Evil and psycho giggle was a little bit to much, Chilling giggle would of done just fine, that can be said for a few other things in the story but that is nit picking, wonderful fic
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My oh my, there should be a continuation to this. Twilight, Rainbow, And Fluttershy. The friends she's closest to. Could call it "Why didn't you tell us you were hurting?" It would continue into how it hurts her friends...
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I was originally going to do an epilogue about that, but I was too lazy to do all that writing. So, if you really want me to finish writing that up, I can add it in once it's finished.
It would be more heartbreaking than part one. Much like real life suicides. Candle lighting, crying, and fury at the fact she didn't say what was happening. It would completely sum up the story in a simple aspect. This should be written. It's making me feel slightly more damaged than before. I've been depressed for a year. Not a tear shall be shed. That's why I aim to write uplifting stories.
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Trust me, I understand how people react to suicides. And I understand how you feel, about trying to write happy stories. I do try, but sometimes I just need to write what I feel.
Thanks for understanding. For now the pain has recided. I can continue trying to get requests.
Another dark story
I love it!!!!!
Theres somthing wrong with me
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Nah, you're normal. I'm the crazy one. Mwahahahahahahaha
Ok can someone tell me if they think that I am heartless or not because I just read this fic and I feel like another Maud Pie no pang or burst of sadness
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Naw, you're fine. I had no feelings or emotions while I was writing it.
..... Maybe I'm the heartless one.....
7198367 I guess we both r then. Anyone else?
OMG what the heck is wrong with me I I I did not gibe any reaction to this story at all I'm I'm I'm a heartless monster
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You're not a monster, I just didn't do a good job writing it. It's not emotional enough. You didn't connect with the characters well enough.
7917777 I sorta do maybe it's because I keep my self emotional less like dash