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Ok, can't someone write a story about Scootaloo without an abusive parent. I mean, I like the story, but still. I feel bad for, I mean she just got raped. :*(
i like this story and i will be writing to see what happens in this story when future chapters come out
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I really appreciate your comments, they make me want to continue the story. I know how you feel about Scootaloo having abusive parents I feel pretty bad that I wrote this but I enjoy dark stories like this. (Call me morbid if you want) I hope I didn't jump the gun too fast here, I think of this chapter of a prologue than anything. If anybody wants more Discriptions I'll try.
3649370 ok and no you didn't jump the gun too fast here and (ok)
I read a lot of scootaloo abuse stories, but this is one of my favorites
please keep on writing!
i think that you should change the CMC tag into a caramel tag and i feel bad for Scootaloo and i like it
omg this is twisted now i feel sad
for poor scootaloo 
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Is that a good thing?
Scootabuse?
Will. Read. Later.
Oh god I cant do this. Some lines dont need to be crossed, Foal Pornography is one of them.
Happy-ish ending I guess...
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There will be more chapters soon
I'm adding what was supposed to be chapter five to chapter four mainly because chapter four is very short and I want it to be longer. I hope this isn't inconvenient to anyone.
Out of allot of abused Scootaloo stories in my opinion this is by far one of the best
I love how you wrote this because I think that almost anyone who goes through something like this would act almost the exact same way
This story is going on my top five Scotaloo stories can't wait till the next chapter
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Thanks for the comment! It really made my day when I read this, which is weird I know.
3674018 Your welcome i'm glad it made you happy and I do really love this story so much so that it was the first one I actually commented on
I like it and I want a sequel and that ok
It's so cute
have a nice christmas, and i'll wait until your new update 
Holy sh- why am I reading this?!
that ok and are you going put this as complete not incomplete and i like it
Sorry my authors note is weird my computer was being a fucktard.
3681633 that ok and are going to put it as complete for this story
New story name ? I liked this one .
I'm a just lay down here and...cry!
i CRIED MANY GIRLY TEARS
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That's good?
What's in the secret door?
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Interesting, I'll have to book mark this for later, see where it goes. Though I gotta admit, I'm beginning to wish Poor Scoots had a normal life in some stories about her, I feel so bad for her when I read these.
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I know what you mean, I was going to write another Scootaloo story where she has alibis family and stuff, but let me be honest. It's so hard for me to wire happy things. I love the dark morbid tales. And I hope the majority of people who read this story do to!
*A loving family
a few misspelings but i give it a 7.75 on writing however for darkness scale it's a 2 at best. i have high standerds. still loved it though!
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Glad you liked it. And sorry for my errors, I write this on my iPod, so naturally auto-correct either doesn't do it's job or does its job too good. I also like the feed back ill try harder with my next story!
4433801 No prob I still loved it though.
What's the secret door?????
I love dark Scootaloo storirs sooo much! Got a like from me :D lol great story though.
good story, realistic, but had a good ending. though i was dissapointed in not seeing her father and caramel flayed alive on a salted pike
Oh, Scootaloo you can't let him keep treating you this way. Go to
3675385 Exactly. But now you can't stop.
3937712 That's sexist.
Well, it had quite a few grammatical mistakes, but except for that it was a beautiful story. I really wish that Caramel and Cold Heart (seriously?) should have died in the end, but it's not my fic. If it was my fic, I would've had either Sweetie Belle or Applebloom brutally murder them. But then again, it's not MY fic.
Just beautiful.
4797961 IKR?!
So sad her son didn't make it, but at least her daughter did.
To be honest I kind of feel it came to an end to fast. One minute she was in the hospital and then living with Dash. I really didn't feel there was any real closure to the situation. I guess I would have been happier if Dash laied the law down her self, or Luna came in and stumped their heads flat in an act of divine judgment.
i don't think she hurt that much if she can just pumped out next batch of foals this quick.
and 3 kids? definitely an upper middle class at least.