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I pretty much agree. The story seemed a bit rushed and some more description would have helped a bit to remedy that and it might help give the story a bit more permeance. As it is, it's a little bit generic in terms of description. It wouldn't take much really, maybe 4k words instead of 3.3k?
I will disagree with the size assessment though, there is nothing wrong with a solid C cup.
Also, fun fact, women have body hair just like men do. Female body hair just tends to be finer and lighter and a bit less pervasive. Actually, if I remember correctly, female body hair actually grows faster than male body hair, just the same as female head hair grows faster, the difference there is that it usually stops growing faster so it doesn't get as long.
Finally
Unfortunately, he forgot he was color blind.
Ignore me...
In that case, I'll just leave this here so there's no chance of misunderstanding what a 36C cup means. The number and the letter actually refer to entirely different measurements. The letter, or cup size, refers specifically to the size of the breasts, or more specifically their forward projection. Whereas the number refers to the size of the chest where the bra strap would normally sit.
lesloveboat.com/shop/images/info/brasize_chart.jpg
At least that's what I think the numbers say. I've never had to buy bras before and hopefully I never will.
6262978 I'm glad somebody got the reference
...Why in all the hells would a magic rule 63 plant shave your legs?
I'm sorry, I know hairy legs is an extreme turn-off for some people, but for me that moment was so hilariously nonsensical I outright started laughing myself silly.
This doesn't really have all that much to do with ponies does it?
This made me read every moment Rick spoke in Eddy Murphy's voice.
>36C
I guess you spent a lot of time gauging what size boobs to be that specific.
Sad but fantastic story, I'm impressed.
Was expecting to see the damsel burn that monster down at the end but a heroic rescue is cool too, things might get a little too hot for my own good.
Does this mean a non-transgender person was mentally changed to be transgender? Or does it mean a transgender person was transformed to the opposite sex? What does this mean?
Looking forward to the next chapter
He... Didnt die did he?
6693959 It just means a man was transformed into a woman or vice versa.
What this story needs is a follow up story as to what happened to the guy turned gal, I mean what was that potion, did it put him to sleep, poison him without the pain, maybe even turned him normal, and what of the eggs, I mean the story was great, but it ended in the worst way, cause now it makes people wanna know what happens to "her" and her new eggs, and what about the flower, do we ever get to see it again, these answers need solving, plus flower sex is really hot.
Hmm! that's kind of clever and badass.
I know a corruption of champions player when I see one.
7096617 LOL.
6266649 reference?
7373854
Donkey from Shrek
7373972 10/10
ehh...
Also, this story looks like it sould have a prequel and a sequel
7508582 I agree, this should have one
when suddenly the green bulb opens,
You never said it was a green bulb in the last paragraph