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Hot stuff.:ajsmug::raritywink: A few typos, but still good.:twilightsheepish:

"pulling them up so her hung in the air" Made me stop for a moment.

Okay so as usual that was pretty amazing and the use of humor from time to time was pretty great. Coco you naughty little mare, shame Rarity didn't bend you over that desk and spank you a few times but she's can be pretty understanding lol. Nice to finally see this (I know, I'm one to talk, don't tell anyone next weekend though) after that blog some time ago I was wondering what happened with this.

Also, Fluttershy's streak, kek, if that isn't a reference to Weekend than that Gargoyle in Beauty has nothing to do with me either :moustache:

this is the 2nd spike x rarity clopfic i've read that has coco pommel spying on the couple having sex. is there going to be one where eventually she just joins them and makes it a threesome

“Have you seen my last spool of Autumn Gold?"

And then Coco died, poor thing.

A few mispelled words but still a good read.

Stories that involve someone getting caught from doing something always make my heart race and I get frantic and worried, not gonna lie I flipped when rarity pulled out her Panties, Good story, fun plot, Coco was cute, not gonna lie I skipped some parts nearing the end, because I didn't want to see if she got caught :twilightsheepish: I'm like that with movies too......Fun story

on a side note.

6200690 Your comment saying there are "Typoes" is a typo, so don't be complaining 'bout stuff ya ain't got no right in complaining 'bout ya hear? :ajsmug: ....it's spelled "Typos"... you also misused periods but that is nit picky.

oh... wow.... The instant turn between safe to not at all is hilarious! And..... What the? SHE RUNS THROUGH PONVILLE NAKED? Oh... my :derpyderp1:
That gift Rarity gave her, that one-word explanation, ahh..... can't stop laughing.

This is the 2nd Sparity clopfic I've ever read, and this one just well executed. Regarding of some typos, this one is featured worthy.

At least they made good show, didn't they? Right, Coco? :twilightblush:

Maybe with a little scene where Spike talks to Coco about that would be awesome. :twilightsmile:

6201251 I second that !

Working for 15 years, barely 20,... holy shit coco has been working since 5!!:rainbowderp:

6203586 I forgot how it was spelled.

I think Coco wants in on the dragon.

A very lovely and funny story. :raritywink:

Excelent. I demand a part two! xDD thanks my friend for making my day so many times including when you showed me this awesome story <3

I enjoyed it, but I have a teeny-wheeny complaint. We see The story from Coco's perspective for most of The story, but when The sex-scene starts, it shifts to Rarity's perspective in The same paragraph. And there is a "she" that I'm not sure who it refers to. Now this didn't destroy The story for me, far from it! Just... thing about it.

This makes me feel uncomfortable, I might have to cancel my fanfic now

“So you mean you’re not mad at me?” Coco asked, looking up at Rarity with teary eyes. When Rarity smiled and nodded, Coco was overcome with an immense joy. “Oh thank you! Thank you~!” She leapt up from the spot, wrapping her arms around Rarity’s waist and snuggling herself deep into the white mare’s chest, snuggling into it as her tears of anguish became tears of joy.

Reading this line i know i have the perfect pic in my phone (got it here): orig08.deviantart.net/8104/f/2014/050/a/5/mentor_and_apprentice_by_pia_sama-d775ppv.png - :moustache:

So fucking hot. It wasn't the threesome i was expecting but it was hot nonetheless :rainbowkiss:

Sequel? :pinkiehappy:

6204645 SHE WANTS THE Dragon

I found the story quite enjoyable, but I noticed a few minor errors

I never met to insult you like that!

that's the first one I saw, I'm pretty sure you meant to say "never meant to insult you"

There date wasn’t that far away,

Also a quick reminder of the "There, Their, and They're Rule", There- location, Their- character(s), They're- contraction for They Are. It's a more common mistake than most think, it's also called the "To, Too, and Two Rule".







9,

she also seemed to hug her at boob level

also known as a "Hello Titty attack"th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.9bS08IpJ4qFhVdEVi98AmQHaGP?pid=ImgDet&rs=1

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