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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

Comments ( 17 )

This was incredibly hot, even if it felt like the last chapter to a much longer story. Well done, I certainly enjoyed it.

8402174
I disagree, I think this has the makings of a start to a much bigger story.

8402598
Could be both.

consented cheating

I'm pretty sure that's called polygamy.

8403009 I would normally agree, though using the term polyamory to be more respectful to the relationship, but with this, there was no guaranty of Coco joining them, so she was entirely out of the relationship, and could have never joined, so I feel like cheating is the more accurate term for what Rarity allowed to happen.

8403013
Well considering that Both Rarity and spike are fine with it, and Coco's exuberant "YES!!!" at the offer, we can safely say that it's not infidelity anymore.

Not to mention that it can't be infidelity if all parties consent to it.

8403205 And... that's true. I'm still going to leave it there, mostly because I'd rather not get yelled at for warning about the possible cheating, instead of a talk like this.

8403225

That is true. Sometimes we have to just place logic aside for the moment, otherwise we miss out on genuinely enjoying things. And if they are THAT adamant about it, just work around it.

8403230 Definitely, even though I am usually not one to shy away from the truth, even if it may offend someone, so this is only staying as there is still a small part of me that believes that there's a point of view that thinks there was infidelity possibly, so I don't feel like it's an outright lie.

Ooh, jumblporn. :3

This was pretty sweet. You get a follow.

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Ooh, jumblporn. :3

...jenga?

8404694 It's in reference to my old username, Jumbled Thought.

A nice read - it certainly has potential to be more than just one shot :twilightsmile:

A few minor grammar errors here and there, but nothing jarring. Except this one tidbit:

Her boss’s purple eyes were gazing down at her

Unless Rarity started wearing contacts or is a changeling then the eyes should be blue.

Pretty nice read. I am now following you!

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