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femikol


An AU enthusiest. Always interested in the what-ifs and seeing how folks expand on them.

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Rainbow has to take care of her little sister, Skyla, while her parents go off on a trip. Curious to see how Rainbow would treat her sister, her friends follow her every step, and learn just how different Rainbow acts around her sister.

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Well i will fave and like this story

This is adorable. It could use a little editing, and I feel like some parts are a little rushed, but I overall like it!

I like the whole idea of Rainbow having a sister. I actually have an OC that's Rainbow's sister too...their relationship though...is not really as good as Rainbow's and Skyla's is. :twilightblush: Best way to describe my character would be to just imagine Rarity as a pegasus :rainbowlaugh:

Anyway, cute story. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

6144427 Okay, that's hilarious, if you don't mind my saying so. :rainbowlaugh:


6144058 6144427 6143888 I'm glad you all like this story! :twilightsmile: I hope I can continue to make this story as great as it is.

Awwww, that is so cute. Rainbow's a nice sister! :D I love this, I really do.
Awesome job on this man, I am liking it!

6144890 Thanks. :twilightsmile: Basically what I wanted to do, was to make a story with a caring, and considerate Rainbow, because you really don't see many of those, sadly.

6144920
Well I have to say I am loving the idea behind this. Rainbow's such a brash and hardheaded individual, but with her sister in the mix, she's caring and considerate, its sweet, and I love it!

Nice job man, I hope to see more soon.

6144681 Thank you. I want to write a story for her soon, but I have a lot of other stories going on at this point. I'll try to get to it when I can I guess. :twilightblush:

Wait how will Scoots react when she finds out about Skyla and how will Skyla react to Scoots? This story is shaping up to be a real heart warming story. Added to my following list.

Omg that was cute. Rainbow is so sweet.

Awwwhahaha man, this is... its killing me heart, I love it so much.
Awesome job man, I love it!

Good job, keep it up!

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How'd you come up with the idea RD had a sister?

6148101 It's not an interesting story, to be honest. :rainbowlaugh: Two days ago, I had read one to many fanfics where Rainbow was her usual headstrong self, and I thought 'You know what? I'm gonna make a fic where Rainbow isn't her usual headstrong self! I'm going to make one where she's caring and considerate!' So I spent the day thinking of ways, and Rainbow having a sister just worked to me. :twilightsmile:

6146554 6146599 6146663 6147247 I'm glad you all like the story so far. :twilightsmile: More is coming soon. :pinkiehappy:

6148132 Awesome saucy! :D

Please keep updating this, I am thoroughly enjoying your writing style and the sheer cuteness overload x3
Also seeing rainbow in big sister move is 20% more awesome than awesome squared

6148877 Thanks. :twilightsmile: Also... What if I told you I have already planned out the third chapter? O.o

Ah. Sorry for the late response, i had soccer. Anyway, it's a nice story, and definitely RD wasn't herself. It's a nice change!

6150287 It's okay. :twilightsmile: I'm actually heading off to a soccer game, myself, soon. O.o But I'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

I like where this is going. Please continue.

Is this an alternate universe where Skyla's RD's 'lil sister and NOT Shining Armor and Cadence's foal?

This is cute and all, but I think Rainbow Dash don't have to call 'Skyla' in almost every sentence. It made conversations look a little bit weird. Btw I still like your story, and want to know what happened about Rainbow Dash's past. :pinkiehappy:

A couple of typos, but other then that this was a great chapter!
I wonder if she'll become a crusader? I forgot if Skyla has a mark or not.

Nice job!

I like it, you don't see many stories where Rainbow is the big sister type, hell, you've inspired me to try and write my own fic.:twilightsmile:

LoL! This was a good chapter, and believe me I feel you about the medication, this is coming from someone with ADHD. Off it I'm like Pinkie Pie, on it I'm like Twilight, plus I have more books than I can read at once.
So no biggie, you're good in my book.:twilightsheepish:

Good chapter! Wait till they meet Pinky and the welcome party she will have, because there is no way she is not aware of Skyla's presence in Ponyville. So the CMC are now up one member for a few weeks so what crusades will they get up to?

The way Rainbow interacts with her sister is absolutely amazing. I LOVE seeing Rainbow Dash's softer side, especially with her sister. I wonder how Scootaloo is going to take this.
Please continue.

6155550 Nope! :twilightsmile: No alternate universe.


6155579 Fair enough, but I can't find a suitable nickname.

6155964 If you mean by Pinkie knowing because of her Pinkie Sense, I can assure you it won't happen like that. Too many custom Pinkie Senses these days, and, for all you know... Are the CMC really up one member? O.o Questions, questions, questions.

6155984 Will do! :twilightsmile:

6155640 I have? O.o Well, I'm glad I could offer inspiration. :twilightsmile:

6156026 Would 'Sky' be a suitable nickname?

Rainboe

Now there is a spelling error I have made many times.

6158841 Ah. It's happened so many times on my iPad, sometimes it turned Rainbow into Rainboe. :facehoof:

6158544 Yes, but it sounds old, like it's been used many, many times. If nothing else- saaaayyyyyyyyyyyy...

To quote twilight
Ahem...
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES

It was a good chapter and I was surprised by Scoots reaction. i am looking forward to seeing how everyone will react to this different side of Dash.

I just guess maybe, there is something between Skylar and Pinkie's energetic excitement, or maybe not.

This is much better than Twilight not telling everypony about Shining Armor.

I love this side of Dashie, its awesome.
NIce job on this! :D

femikol where is the next chapter and why did you take the sad tag off this story

6190675 Rainbow87Dash brought to my attention how utterly stupid, and irrelevant to the story that chapter was. I'll add it in at some other point, when it's more relevant.

A short fluff compensation is what I was aiming for.

Well, like I said before, awesome chapter dude, loved it.
Nice work.

HWAH! NEW CHAPTERS!

I forgot the name of this story, but when I saw your username I saw this story at the top of your user page. xD

These hypotheses that twilight have don't get much lead-in.

By Skyla, do you mean Princess Skyla from the toy line?

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