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xStellar_Bubbles


A derp trying to make sense of reality.

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Every since Twilight Sparkle became a princess, she has wondered if there's really a difference between alicorn magic and unicorn magic. So after a tornado and some spellcasting, something has certainly changed...

The main six seemed to have switched not minds, but personalities!
Will this event be fixed in time? Or will there be eternal chaos for the main six in their forms?

Cover art by RatingTitan2. Go check him out, he's awesome!

Proofread by HeartLinda, go check him out as well as thanking him for his proofreading skills!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 29 )

Bit short, but the writing's serviceable and I'm interested in where you'll take the story, so I'll be keeping a watch on this one.

5071486 More chapters are coming fairly soon :twilightsmile:

not really long chapter but story is really begining now.:pinkiehappy:

A little too fast there. Needs more development and introduction. And not making it obvious at first.

5272290 I see. I do seem to still have trouble with pacing. :applejackconfused:

5272294

Just have them respond like they would normally, instead of going through each one's reaction like a character checklist. Except when they do respond, they act differently. Not enough to confirm anything, but just enough to check if everyone's alright. Then Rainbow being the smart one now (air quotes) figures it out after they separate, sometime after she's buried by books in the library while trying to work out some complex mathematical thing that she thought might help her routine. (I'm an egghead!) Then she can frantically fly all over town stressing out like Twilight, to warn the others not to incite a panic. And then she runs into each of the others, in very atypical situations. Like I dunno, Twilight sleeping in a tree, while AJ bucks apples nearby with all the driving force of a newborn kitten. (then gets upset when she disturbs a single leaf)

you have rushed there a little bit, but it still isn't bad story. :pinkiesmile:

5273635 Yeah... :twilightoops: Now if you'll excuse me, I'll be improving that chapter.

6113880 Oh shoot, I completely forgot about this! :rainbowlaugh: Well, when I'm done with stuff, I'll try and work on this as soon as possible, 'kay? :pinkiesmile: Also, thanks for the watch. :rainbowkiss:

6113959 You forgot about it?:rainbowhuh:

Lol, anywayz ya got some interesting stories. So I plan on stayin' around and pokin' ma nose in them.:ajsmug:

Keep up the good work.

6114115 Duh, because I'm so busy with dang school! :raritydespair:

Yay! :yay:

6114120 Can't wait for the next chapter! I've been looking forward to a story where they actually swap personalities. Have fun writing it!

6910877 Not the most original idea, now that I look back at it, but I'm glad you're enjoying a long dead story. :rainbowlaugh:

6912631 Not if you believe it's dead. Just start writing on your free time.

6912791 Well keep trying, I believe in you. :twilightsmile:

6912804 Honestly, I love transformations. Another thing I liked was body swapping. But, I tried to twist the idea somewhat, instead of the usual consciousness of a pony just swapping with another's.

6912817 I still don't think it's too original, but it's good enough. :rainbowlaugh:

6912819 First time I've ever seen something like this.

I wish this could continue. It’s such a fun story idea. I like how you made the personality swaps consistent, as in Twilight and Rainbow have swapped their personalities, same goes for Fluttershy and Applejack, and then Pinkie and Rarity. It’s two each, and I’m curious to know why you chose to swap their personalities that way.

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