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Frost Windchill is known to be a storyteller of sorts. Comfortable with telling the occasional sprite tale or legend, a child approaches him one day and asks for a real story.

And so Frost tells one- the story of his life. It's not a typical story, and there's more to it- just as there's more to the descendant of a Lunar Guard. It's a story not just of himself but the heroes he stood beside- big and small, legendary and obscure. But there's something amiss, buried lies between the lines.

After all, it's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.

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Comments ( 954 )

As always, critique or feedback of any kind is highly appreciated. Thank you, and cheers.

Greetings my friend. I am interested third party and I noticed the posting of this story. May I suggest you look into this document?
http://tinyurl.com/FoESSCP

and this link

http://www.ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/58852.html

I assure you that it will be worth your time. They serve as places where various FoE authors can sit down and assist each other's fiction or simply to have your piece in an easily accessible location, so I assure you, you will be in good hands if you join the chats.
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Personally, I've found it to be a great place! please check it out!

I am loving this one so far, keep it up. :pinkiesmile:

I am curious, how do you managed to write Russian lines?

My gun lover side was having a great time during this chapter. Congrats on the level of detail and keep it up!

Simply amazing, and your choice of music was beautiful and at the same time haunting...I have to say, that by far, yours is my favorite Fallout Equestria side story and will remain so.

122794 Can it be? Another comment at last? :pinkiehappy:

I think I might have gone a tad overboard on the gun detail in chapter five. It's good to see that you like it, but I think a few of my readers were a bit overwhelmed. And as soon as chapter seven comes out... XD

I'm very fortunate to have learned Dumka. It's by far the most difficult piece I've ever come to play, and though it's been about a year since I've last tried to play it, I felt it was appropriate after a harrowing night in the City of Blood and Iron.

Thank you for your feedback, Sapphire. It's much appreciated. :twilightsmile:

... well I'll definitely say he does have a certain flare with his ice magic. Yeesh...:twilightoops:

165086 New comment! :rainbowderp: --> :rainbowkiss:

Well, what did you expect, honestly? It's not like he wouldn't keep his word...

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Heh, with this story i don't really know what to expect, that's why it's good. Besides, this has a level of awesome akin to hellsing, so it's a really fun read, i just tend to have a rather strong imagination, which is good at times but others, well not in this case but i've been running low on brain bleach of late. :derpyderp2:

165263 Thank you kindly, though I honestly don't know much about Hellsing stuff... :twilightblush:

165358

not a problem, it's not a manga for everyone, OP vampires tearing it up against other OP vampires in england old school style. plenty of big guns too, case in point is a 30mm shoulder fired, breach loaded anti-freak cannon. just look up the harkonnen cannon, it's quite the weapon.

165371 Um... WOW. Really. I don't think I'm quite that over the top. o.o

...

Yet. :raritywink:

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well, FoE project horizons (i think) has that wonderful piece of gun that can essntially punch a hole through the moon from equestria so so long as it ain't used too often i don't mind a trump card :pinkiehappy:

Yick...That was a horrific way to go, even for someone that twisted...

177382 Which is yet another reason why you never, ever, ever, ever piss off Frost that badly.

"We've been comprimised! Game over, pony, GAME OVER!" :raritycry:

189490 I'll admit- I chuckled after reading this.

yaknow, frost takes things like that hunter unit kinda like i do...

although myresponse would be "Fuck... this is gonna get interesting fast."

190345 All the better for ze big action scene in chapter 10!

I approve of this. Wunderbar!

One more thing! I have an Ask Frost tumblr!

http://askfrostwindchill.tumblr.com/

*smoke bomb*

............Wow that was...Unexpected

234219 A new commentator! :pinkiehappy:

Forgive me, but ah, what do you refer to? Lots of unexpected things happening in this chapter (guessing the bit about Rig). :twilightsheepish:

I could have sworn that i had commented before (•.°)
Anyways loving the story also the part with Rigs mechanical leg is really what stumped me...Hehe bad pun. Also if you ever need some help and im not busy with Fallout equestria misfits send me a message im always happy to help a fallout fan ^-^/)

The detail you put in about weapons,ammo, and modifications was simply astounding!

That was a pretty greusome way to kill someone I'm going to assume that Frost is a master of psychological warfare.

I absoultly love this story!keep up the amazing work!

234909 Thank you kindly. *grumbles something about possibly having broken up that chapter into two...*

Psychological warfare master? Ehhhh, maybe. Now, Azrael....

Again, thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:

SO MANY REFERANCES!

Now I just wonder if its a good or a bad thing that I knew all of them?

I wonder what clever name you would give an ACOG? And the TF2 one had me laughing so hard as well as Frosts reaction to biscuts I would of done the samething. Also love the 1911 shoutout!

Amazing chapter. I think Azrael and Rig might take Calamity and Steelhooves spot as my favorite companion.

Any who I think may have rambled a bit. Great chapter and I love the amount research(or just knowledge that you already have, if that's the case its always fun to meet another firearm enthusist) keep up the amazing work!

TL;DR awesome job!

241948 Something tells me you'd love Pink Eyes. SO MANY MEMES!

Probably just call it an ACOG. Advanced Combat Optical Gunsight seems descriptive enough, really. Personally, I thought the TF2 ref might be pushing the cheesiness boundary. ^^;

:pinkiegasp: wat. Really? I'm not sure I can live up to those characters.

Bit of both, honestly. And thank you for the longest comments I've received so far! :fluttercry:

Um......I don't even...

I don't know what scares me more the way he killed her or the fact that I found that spell totally awesome!

As always amazing chapter and thank you for writing an awesome story!

249427 o rly? :derpytongue2:

249436 Can we settle with "Don't piss off Frost"? :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you kindly. I was actually a tad worried the chapter dragged on a bit long and had too much breadth. :twilightsheepish:

250341

Yeah we can settle with not pissing him off.

250341 when you minchend griffen cant see in robots :trixieshiftright: bit of a give away ta something:trollestia:

250509 Oh, you meant Azrael? Mmmmm, I guess. ::raritywink:

250519 eeyup and caps for dooing it in stile :twilightsmile:

Lovin' it so far especially the history bit. Always loved Russia.
Good choice on the music and honestly when I saw the name I instantly thought "Moonlight Sonata"
And I thought the name of the bar was "The Rusty Steed" but after Frost notices the piano he calls it "The Rusty Pelican".

256965 Thank you kindly, and... major derp on my part. *quickly goes to fix that*

Amazing chapter. I also really like the insight on griffin mythology:twilightsmile:

259228 Thanks. That specific part of the chapter took quite a bit of work and I still don't think I quite nailed it. And I'm sure you can see some familiar phrases if you've played Bastion. :derpytongue2:

Oh...damn, that was intense. Murder the people who know who you truly are to save your friends from knowing too soon? Sorry, that last bit with Wendy and Miranda rubbed me the wrong way.
Great chapter as always.

That was amazing! Just the sheer amount of action in this chapter was just phenomenal!

Rig's um.. situation just increase her level of badassery! Also is that a Portal referance I detect?

The things some people do to keep secrets...sometimes is just a little too much.

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261012 That was the intended effect, so mission accomplished!

261085 Surprisingly, action's pretty hard for me nowadays; dialogue's easier. Even more surprisingly, it used to be the other way around with my previous stories. :trixieshiftright:

Also, I made a Portal reference somewhere? Jeez, it's only been a few weeks since I wrote the chapter and I'm already forgetting. :rainbowlaugh:

261127 "It's all secrets and lies with these ponies..." :pinkiecrazy:

Well, that's Frost for you.

...aaand now any sympathy I was able to have for the protagonist has been destroyed. Like, regardless of any other factors, I can't sympathize with him anymore because he's not a vigilante, he's just SCUM. Meaning it will be impossible to care what happens to him. Meaning the story will no longer be interesting. And it's been pretty great up til now, so that's really disappointing. :ajbemused:

Wow Frost, I can kind of understand why he killed them but still just wow. Great chapter mate keep up the awesome work!

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I think it was Portal reference. It was right when Rig entered the night club:derpytongue2:. Really? I thought the action was spot on but then again I can see how the dialogue would flow a lot easier though.

261302

He did get instant karmaric justice for it though.

I know, Adder's got a way out with this, folks. Ya just got to stick with it. The dirt rat bas-I mean the author killed a little molly mule and defaced the statue of another, and I'm gonna stick around.

ErrantIndy
Pres. Equestrian Association for the Advancemnt of Mules (EAAM)

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