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A choose-your-own Wasteland story, Luck of the Draw depends on audience participation to direct the fate of Lucky, the protagonist of the story. Born in Stable 7, a lone pegasus among earth and unicorn ponies, Lucky is anything but. Will he become a savior or scourge of the wastes? From chapter 1, his fate is in your hands...or hooves, whichever you prefer.

Go to http://luckysfate.tumblr.com/ to vote on how the story goes! After enough votes are tallied, the story will progress, for better or worse!

P.S. Don't forget to tell your friends!

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 19 )

Great job! I really love the idea behind this story, even though I usually don't like crossovers. I want to see where you going to take this ... :twilightsmile:

Now to talk a bit about your writing: it's pretty good. I didn't spot any grammatical errors, only some missing punctuations here and there.
But that's nothing I'm going to fret about. Loving the references, and I couldn't stop laughing when I read "Tunnel Eels" for some reason. :moustache:


Really keep on the good work. Imma waiting for chapter 2. :derpyderp1:


Also, FIRST.

P.S.: Take my 4.5 stars, take them! :pinkiecrazy: And add an introduction to the story. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the comment and the vote. Remember to vote on how to proceed, I can't write the plot without it.

Oh..well this is an interesting idea. I don't normally read FoE fics, but this is relevant to my interests.

Definitely going to keep reading this.

also....EXPLOSIVES FTW. :pinkiecrazy:

this is epic a story where we choose his fate:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

this is epic bro

gotta say smart idea on using a poll to determine lucky's fate. good story so far just one question where you hungry when naming these ponies lol :rainbowlaugh:

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I voted for Lucky becoming an Orchard Farmer, just mainly because I like the idea of him working for/with Tomato. :twilightsmile:

And also, "Tunnel Eels" still cracks me up for some reason. :derpyderp1:

This one really looks interesting, its a new style in the big world of Fallout: Equestria stories. I voted for Little League Coach, mostly because I think it'd be cool to see an unarmed hero. Anyway, great start and I'll be watching! :pinkiehappy:

So. I rolled a die (with a dicebot, since 13-sided die do not exist) and got 12... Marriage Counselor. A twelve-year-old marriage counselor. Somehow, I feel this fits in with his being lucky and unlucky. On the one hoof, he's going into it hella blind and it's probably a pretty hellish job. On the other, he'll have an incredible advantage in future relationships after having seen a good number of the many bumps they can hit and will thus have a better idea of how to deal with or avoid them. Once he gets over the :derpyderp1: phase anyway.

Not that I actually expect Speech to end up as one of his tag skills, since it's unlikely many people chose it.

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Hm, you bring up a good point. Maybe I should change "marriage counselor" to "Matchmaker" or "Friendshipper" or something like that.:twilightblush:

That might actually fit better, yes, though the original title might fit the advanced course of the job. Ponies in the profession could cut their teeth on schoolyard squabbles before they advance to dealing with matrimonial mixups.

The results of the First Poll: Explosives and Guns tied with 6 votes each, the 3rd one I chose was Survival, which had 4 votes. Speech also had 4 votes, but I couldn't think of a way to fit it in, so sorry to those who voted for that. Please read this next chapter and vote! Enjoy!

New chapter! :pinkiehappy:

6000+ words ... Dear Celestia ... :derpyderp1:

Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Sorry, but the stores just shout 'Loot!' at me, and probably most of the rest of us as well. Good a direction as any at this point.

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Don't forget to reread the tumblr and vote for his next perk! I decided that should also be handled by the audience too...however, if there isn't enough votes or a tie, I will choose it instead.

another cool chapter
i thought lyra and bon bon would do somthing like this????
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Well I'm a little bummed out by Lyra and Bon Bon though. still, good chapter.

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Well, that was kind of the point. How do you think I felt when I wrote it? Not sunshine and rainbows, that's for sure.:fluttercry:

Hmm its sad about lyra and bon bon but i think he should explore the unexplored lands to the North

i agree lyra n bon bon was quite sad then again this is a fallout story it needs sad moments n twisted moments no matter how screwed up they may be. Lucky fly for your life! :flutterrage:

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