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6045781 eeyup
>That synopsis
WTF is this shit?
Okay, time to fuel up.
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Story index page:
Apparently you do not know how to do titles. Refer to this page to understand how titles work.
Long description:
Not much wrong here, though when you first refer to a place, don't use an abbreviation (CHS), spell it out fully (Canterlot High School).
Chapter 1:
Right off the bat, do not use spaces to indent, use the "Tab" key on your keyboard to indent. Also, if you're going to indent the first paragraph, make sure to indent every paragraph after it.
Also be sure to utilize spell-check.
slipping
spun
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Two words.
Do not use parentheses, please.
cowered.
Put a space between the first comma and "alone,".
Two words.
were
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Okay, given the context here, this made me chuckle.
Again with the parentheses...
...
Spell out the number. Twenty-seven.
ground
1:
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How do you put that into a gas tank?
2:
One space between words.
Promising premise, but poorly executed... no pun intended. You should either find a proofreader, or read your work and fix your errors before you post it. If you don't know what to fix... you should definitely find a proofreader.
Hopefully our
KennyAnon in Equestria Girls' second chapter will be more interesting.6047667 Best piece of feedback I've ever seen.
I was using a different mobile device to write, because my computer just loves to catch and error anytime I may use it.
The mobile device always leads me to the wrong word and never tells me a mistake.
I will take your advice and use grammar and spell check from different sites. Or at least search for a proof reader.
Thnx for the entertaining feedback.
P.S before I finish the next chapter, I'll fix the first. Finished.
Anyone else think anon is alot like Fegelein from HPR?
used to, or accustomed to.
Forgot a period here.
flown
They're human-ish, not ponies.
first. Always spell out a number.
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My first thought was Kenny from South Park.
6050059 Sweet. Less mistakes. Thnx again.
Huh. Well. Why the fuck not.
You have some SERIOUS mental issues to work out.
this earned you a follow.