very nice story. not entirely sure why someone else already voted down on it, but some people are just dicks. wonderfully written and no grammar errors that i could see.

6011851 There is always that person who downvotes because they don't like the idea, or the coupling, or something similar that doesn't mesh with their own ideals. You just have to accept it and move on.

Awesome story man.

6011868
Indeed. What annoys me though was that when i went to the main page, there were no further views. Someone had downvoted without reading the story.

I looooooove this story

6014884 That was a typo. Corrected and well spotted.

Huh, and here was me thinking it'd turn out that Cheerliee hid Mac's boxers in an attempt to get closer to him...

You good sir, know how to write a proper love story. The detail and overall vocabulary made me love it all the more. Not to mention you like to mention sex in a very scientific way, I look forward to the works you create later. Well Done

6022412 If you liked the style, there are three other stories done in the same 1st person descriptive as part of this continuity. you might enjoy those if you haven't already read them.

This was a spectacular experience. Thank you.

Em...
so what about Aj-x-Mac that is canon in these two stories?