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Golden Flare


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This story is a sequel to Heart of Gold 2: Date Night (Another Hearts and Hooves Day Special)


Today is Mother's Day and every mom in Equestria is spending it with their families, especially Mayor Mare, who is spending it who she considers her son, Golden Flare. As they go about their day, they reminisce on the day they met and became a family.

Author's Note:
I know this isn't much of a description, but not a lot happens in this story.

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Comments ( 4 )

Luv it! A great way for a Mother's day story!

I don't care if it was short, it was great nonetheless! :pinkiesmile: :twilightsmile: I just love how whenever you do these holiday specials you don't just create sad or upbeat tales but you also expand your OC's back story at the same time, truly wonderful :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

I just read this story and boy was it so sweet! :heart:10/10 I say!

There aren't many Mayor Mare fics out there that focus on her as a whole, so first off props to you on that.

Second it was a nice show to make her a mother in the story. No one as far as I know has ever done that for her. While I see the Mane Cast as motherly figures all the time, even Trixie and such, it's nice to see the back ground characters get notice from time to time. The Old Grey Mare was a nice story done by a wonderful writer, and like this story it was well thought out, though yours had a simpler premise. nothing wrong with that! I loved how you made her a compassionate pony. :scootangel:

While I'm tired of seeing Adopt a Scootaloo fics, nice as they are, they're kind of the same now. That's part of the reason I started writing in the first place was to give recognition to others and ideas no one has done yet.

When I read this story it got me thinking about something I wrote in my story, Trixie Secretary Extraordinaire!, on how I planned to make a character in my story meet her mother after she was abandoned and her father died. I'm just glad you did this. Hope you plan to expand on it later. Otherwise i might beg you to let me do a spiritual successor to it!

Still, good job! You earned my following!

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