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Spectrum Analysis is an ace detective from Manehatten, and his assistant Eye Spy still has some work to do. They both are in for the case of their lives, when the mayor of Ponyville calls them in because a criminal known as the "Cutie Mark Killer" is striking down on innocent ponies. Every Monday morning, a picture of a cutie mark is hung on the town hall door, and by Sunday evening the bearer is dead.
Spectrum and Eye team up with bearers of the Elements of Harmony to take down this villain. The only problem is that they have no idea who it is. The killer seems to leave no trace of evidence behind.
Will Spectrum and his friends stop the Cutie Mark Killer in time?

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 19 )

The synopsis is what drew me in but the prologue made me stay. I can't wait to read more and see this story really pick up. Also, the names of the detectives are rather clever. It's the best OC pony names I've seen thus far. :twilightsmile: I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Definitely a unique idea you've got here. Roll with it.

I love mistery :heart::heart::heart: so you are on my reading list :twilightsmile: ( in the favourites :pinkiehappy: )

Calling the CMC as the murderers. It seems to be the obvious before-the-story-really-starts choice.

Cutie Mark Killer
Cutie Mark Crusaders

Crusaders are usually synonymous with religous murderers anyways.

I expect chapters at least once every 1-3 days....

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You may actually get your wish for Chapter 1: I'm almost finished and beginning the process of editing :pinkiehappy:

keep going, it's nice that the backstory is all played out.

Ooh... :disgunbegud:

♫Another one bites the dust
Another one bites the dust
And another one gone, and another one gone
Another one bites the dust♪

Nice work, but do you think you could tab the paragraphs a bit more? It's still kind of hard to tell where they begin, especially near the middle where they start blending in with each other.

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Yeah definitely, I'll keep that in mind for future chapters, and when I get the chance I'll go and edit this chapter

Oh noes! Why u gun kill Snails?! I mean, I don't really care for him or anything, but I feel sad.

interesting :derpyderp2: Keep going :rainbowkiss:

Suspans end !?! Very nice :raritystarry:

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