Escape from Canterlot

Jubilee Glider

Jubilee Glider #1 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 2 · 7 · Invitations ·

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I like it. I can't wait to read more!
Have a like too!

dues12

dues12 #2 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 2 · 3 · Invitations ·

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Thank you very much

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GloomyFace

GloomyFace #4 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 2 · · Invitations ·

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Please do yourself a favor and change this story's cover art to something that is not your avatar... and preferably to something that isn't cobbled together in pony creator.

As it is, you are just asking for people to downvote this without reading a single word.

Nightdasher1

Nightdasher1 #5 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 1 · 2 · Invitations ·

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Ok....the storyline itself isn't bad, but I do still think the wording could be improved upon. Also, in the authors note it's not a good idea to ~~beg~~ ask for attention like that.

DARKPHANTOM13

DARKPHANTOM13 #6 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 1 · 1 · Invitations ·

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Might be a good idea to find an editor to clean it up a bit. Anyway I agree with the guys, something is up. Thankfully there isn't a dark tag so it couldn't be that bad. For now I'll stick around and see where this goes.

Sun Dial

Sun Dial #7 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · · Invitations ·

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Might want to cut out your OC from the story, and have waited till you had a few chapters to post up. The OC is a distraction and feels unneeded.

Roarin Thunder

Roarin Thunder #8 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 3 · 6 · Invitations ·

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The storyline sucks so far. Your OC is so bad that I feel the need to dry heave. Then the Flashlight comes in and I'm done. This story cannot be saved. :[

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