• Member Since 13th Oct, 2014
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Glitter Grenade


Writing GLORIOUS trash. Nothing more or less.

Comments ( 9 )

Are the two other chapters just alt endings essentially? o-o

*notices the downvotes*

*thinks*

Hmm, I should have added more sex.

*goes on her day*

5821498 Maybe just a tad, lol. Or just have only one alt ending so you don't get peoples' hopes up. It'd be kind'a neat if the other two chapters actually ended differently or they took a break some other way instead of being the same hunk of text just with multiple things omitted. Either way, for what sex there was, it was indeed very erotic, friend~

After seeing that pic (is that supposed to be fluttershy?) I know i have to give this story a read. *cough* (go ahead call me shallow!)

Ahh damn... here goes nothing :derpytongue2:

Rape kinda means the story needs a dark tag, also there's a disappointing amount of actual sex. Still hot though and well written.

Edit: Somehow I missed the two other chapters, fun stuff.

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I had a hard time picking the cover-art. Go on, enjoy. I won't judge you.

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It's not outright rape but really dubious consent. Also, I've been horribly influenced by japanese hentai so I can kinda see how it looks. I've added dub-con to the fetish list but I'm not going to add a dark tag because it's nothing than like A Canterlot Stall. The tone's off, you know.

And I tried to add chemistry between Fluttershy and Shutter from the gecko. Everyone else is just hot and horny.

>And the worse of the worse: CLEAN VANILLA SEX.
NOOOOO NOT THAAAT HOW COULD YOOUUU???.....

Kinda wish this had a prequel that explained HOW Dash got talked into signing the contract

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