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Holocron


Gaze within the Holocron and see what stories it has to tell.

Comments ( 48 )

this is the best story ever. you had BETTER update it, and good luck with winning the competition! :raritywink: :heart:

you mest make enozer ven! you MEST!!! :pinkiegasp:

5807777
I can try, I see you're enjoying my work.

5808363
Which part was the "daaammmmmnnnn!"

5808401 starting with the strip tease and ending with the clean up? pretty much her entire attitude during that part. bitch be on a quest.

5808513
And yet she was in control the entire time. Only Horizon can be balls deep with four guys and still be the dominating one. :rainbowlaugh:

I am, it just has so much story to it... If you know what I mean?:twilightblush:

5872201
You seem to have enjoyed my latest piece :rainbowlaugh:
Curious how the next chapter will be :twilightsmile:

Man, Horizon is insatiable.

Not to be a grammar natzi or anything but at the part where Elisive is wondering if bubble berry had a license you forgot the quotation mark where Elisive starts to speak.:derpyderp1: but you did a good job so far.

Wow, Horizon really know how to make an orgy.

5970930
Magic and persuasion, that's all it takes.

5971097 Just out of curiosity, who made the cover art for your story? Whoever did it, knew how to draw a sexy Horizon Glyph.

5971166
My friend TJPet2 he draws only what inspires him.

*sees every chapter is 2000 words....*
huh thats a very common number here....

5990545
That was my own personal challenge. I wanted to see if I could write a good sex story with a beach theme, making sure each chapter had its appropriate details, all while keeping it at an exact 2,000 words.

5991023
Next chapter is the finally. The contest is over in a week or two, so I better hurry along.

I wish to read this, but I am conflicted due to an unknown word. What is paizuri? I only ask because I don't want to read this and then BAM!, ponies fucking while covered in shit, or something disgusting like that.

6042402
Paizuri is basically tit fucking I didn't know what that word meant until after I started writing this. Please, enjoy :twilightsmile:

6042515 ooh, one of my type of things.
I tried to look up the word, but got LoL references to show for it and other fantasy game stuff.

6042538
You can thank Ebony Stallion for introducing me to this word. :rainbowlaugh:

Applejack? I thought his name was Applebuck

6055270
Applebuck was with Horizon when she was casting the orgy spell but then when she blew off everyone's clothes, she saw Applejack and went to him.

reverse rape? what even is that?....

6071747
Reverse rape is characterized as the female forcing the self on the male.

6072197 wow...that's really sexist....

6072296
Sorry mate, but that's the definition.

6072359 well god danm....

6072398
Well I'm proud of the fact nopony in this story had sex when they didn't want it :pinkiehappy:

6072621 ....then why did you put reverse rape in the description?....

6074502
Because Horizon is forcing herself on someponies. It's one of those technicalities, if you'd like, I can take that part in the description down.:twilightsmile:

6075148 k but is raping involved? i only cared that the description was accurate....

6075232
in one chapter, Horizon forces herself on Applebuck(male Apple Bloom) and though he didn't say no to fight it, he never said he wanted it in the first place. So it is dependent on the reader.

6075270 i see , technicalities , while that would be rape , that's not something that would qualify as such in the legal system (at least until sjws have their way with it , which they have in some places already) , but the legal system is a fucking terrible standard to go by , but this is also at the same time fiction so rl standards needn't necessarily apply neither....

You should've added the Rule 63 mentions.

"Reverse rape"

"Reverse"

I'm pretty sure it's just called "rape", even when it happens to a male

7130342
yes, it's still rape and rape is wrong, but the fetish is technically called "Reverse Rape"

Where'd you get the cover image?

7166569
I had it custom made. From an artist friend of mine.

7166739 I wonder who he is. Also, you should add the R63 warning in this story.

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