Sanctuary

A pony prostrates himself for Queen Chrysalis, hoping for her favor.
This does not go over well.

Chapters (1)

Comments ( 12 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 12
- Newest First
- Oldest First

Julia

Julia #1 · Feb 21st, 2015 · · ·

Black Ultron

Black Ultron #2 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 4 · ·

cdn.gifbay.com/2014/02/the_best_my_body_is_ready_gif_ive_ever_seen-117569.gif

Europa

Europa #3 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 1 · ·

Mistakes were made.

15thDoctor

15thDoctor #4 · Feb 21st, 2015 · · ·

That is gonna be Fantastic :)

Perteks

Perteks #5 · Feb 21st, 2015 · · ·

Good, atleast some pretty much realistic scenario of what gonna be end of pony who went to changelings

silvadel

silvadel #6 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 1 · ·

He did not have the courage of his convictions. If he had stood fast when she said run, he might have had a chance.

Mooncalf

Mooncalf #7 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 5 · ·

Oh yes. Everyone is the hero of their own story, and everyone thinks they matter so much. But just as everyone else is just a bit player in your story, so are you one in theirs. Sonder at its best.

To whit: Our nameless protagonist thought he was a rebel, the pony making a stand against the sheer unfairness that some are truly immortal and some are doomed to be forgotten, striking a devil's bargain in the hopes of getting some satisfaction, some revenge, perhaps even a chance at remembrance.

To the Changelings, he was some idiot blundering into their midst with no idea what he was doing and no idea what a predator truly is.

And to Celestia, the Mane Six and Equestria at large, he was a nobody whose actions will not be remembered beyond "Ugh, my crown is missing again. How annoying."

Excellent read.

silvadel

silvadel #8 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 3 · ·

When you have crossed the line, you have no second choice. He shouldn't have peed himself either. His correct answer as to what else to offer, was himself.

Limelight02