My name is Violet, I'm a transgender fanfic writer and aspiring artist from Sindelfingen, Germany. I'm a mare of many facets, I hope you'll want to learn about them all!
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Next time, consider writing separate stories. Fans of grimdark will downvote the light and fluffy, fans of light and fluffy will downvote grimdark. If you'd simply done a sequel, you might not have a 2:1 downvote ratio.
5633106 it was the commissioner's request, but I'll keep that in mind, thanks.
To be honest, I'm not too worried about what the anonymous voters think. The person I wrote it for loved it, and that's what's important.
loved it
5633130 As someone who's been part of the furry fandom for many years (and trolled like nobody's business!), and seen the commissions made there... I am not surprised someone wanted the story to play out this way.
Disappointed, but far from surprised.
I suppose I should write a story one day, just to piss of the villain fans, of all the villains being lined up and shot in the head by Kim Jung Un, who becomes the greatest hero in Equestria and leads the ponies to crush the evil Americans!
Now THAT's a trollfic!
Dam just dam
Chapter One is not light and fluffy clop when you introduce mistaken identity at the bottom rather than at the top of Two.
Rape and ovipositoning? I like the sound of this.
Well, finally got around to reading it and, I must say, I was not disappointed.
5635325 That would entertain me. That story would be hilarious.
6143256 Oh indeed. It'd be as brilliant as Old Spice Guy In Equestria!
6154760 Terry Crews in Equestria...::
That right there is why Chrysalis would fail...for underestimating Luna.
Luna is far from powerless...and if she truly wanted to, could easily overpower Chrysalis. Hell she can still turn into Nightmare Moon and use her powers without all the evilness taking over. Luna is the Princess of the Night, which is when all the shadows are present. So it wouldnt surprise me if Luna is the one who has the Special Forces guards, or even Royal Assassins. So underestimating Luna is a very bad idea.
Im sure if she also got the rest of the Element Bearers, they could break Celestia and Twilights mind control and easily defeat Chrysalis. Hell all they really need to do is convince Discord to take out Chrysalis then BOOM itsdone.
There should be a sequel where she Underestimates Luna, and Luna just kicks her ass. But thats my opinion...what do all you others think?
6759427 i think chrissy woud win the nightmare frome is fake and she is jest slitly more powerfull then tai
6911919 Her Nightmare form isnt fake, she just doesn't like to use it in fear that it will take over, but without her jealousy, it wouldn't be able to take over. And think about it...the only reason Nightmare was defeated by Tia was because she used the Elements. If she hadn't used them, Nightmare would have beaten her, meaning that she is alot more powerful than Tia, not just slightly
6912128 ok still not as strong as chrissy after draning tie and twi and i do not think she woud do a frontol asalt mabe trike her but how is nightmare so much stronger if tie held back...
There have to be way more Changelin Oviposition stories