Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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Sooooo.....
When's the clop, tho?
5909191 you didn't see it? it's in there, you just need to look real hard.
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Damn. I missed it.
I guess I'll just have to read it again!
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The clop is coming! Just hold your horses!
Some people...
ilu
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Oh yeah! I'll be holding my horse, if you know what I mean.
What? I'll be holding my Redheart plushie! What were you thinking?
"To Zanarkand," eh? I haven't played that one in a while. *rushes to his piano*
I'll have more relevant commentary after I've had a chance to read the chapter.
I think you meant wrap.
Really loving the story, keep up the good work.
mused*
perform*
Great chapter. I was wondering if you were planning on doing every single day from 1 to 14, but that would make the story super long-winded, so how long do you plan on keeping these two in the cabin for?
You made a FFX reference and you are ebil for it, but I still like this story :3 I mean it; I haven't been able to be around for a few years because lack of time and a few issues, I get time to write, I start writing pony stuff again (Not big surprise, said the Heavy), and come back here to find this...
To put it bluntly: This and a few other stories have literally consumed half a week of my time and I wubs it.
So...
More, pwease :3?
Sidenote: MORE CUDDLES NAW! (And humps :3?) And beautiful artwork btw ^^
Well, the Silver Wing issue isn't honestly all that bad by itself. But it's extremely bad for Bonny because she's a bit on the all-too-trusting and naive side. Or at least, was. That was a bad time in her life to meet someone like that who just wanted a quick fuck, male or female.
Still, hearing about Chris breaking this guy's wings would be neat so long as news never got back to Lyrabon.
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Thank you! Fixed now. And I'm glad you're liking it.
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Thank you! I got it fixed now. And I don't want to spoil anything, but I only have 6 chapter left to do in this story. Aslo... we are coming close to the end of this cabin.
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I know I'm terrible for referencing FFX, but I had to. I just had to do it for the laughs. I'm happy your liking the story though! And Cuddles and hums will be soon-ish. That's all I will say.
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Do it!
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Yeah she was pretty young when it happened and she took it really hard.
I actually didn't notice that it was that song (Didn't click it) until you pointed it out.
And now I just love you even more! I actually hadn't faved the fic yet, but this seals the deal! img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121113014503/mlp/images/9/96/Rarity_sparkling_eyes_S3E1.png
Awwww sheet, I wanna hug Bon Bon ;w; poor lass.
Nicely done man, I hope Bon Bon will eventually gro out of this fear.
GAWD, this chapter full of feelz.
Keep it up!
I really enjoy the story so far, and I really hope I won't have to wait too long for the next chapter
Posted this comment before actually reading the chapter.
Had to; the title just makes me smile evilly...
So, the bastards name was Silver Wing? Hmmmm. * Slowly sharpens machete*
Either you forgot the apostrophe, or you were referencing this story. (I'm guessing the former.)
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Aye. If she was a bit older and more worldly she might have just been a bit depressed for a time instead of what we got. Plenty of gals and guys out there just looking to scratch an itch and move on, you get used to it. What Chris went through was far worse by comparison, as far as level of betrayal goes. But BonBon was simply softer, weaker, and more vulnerable with her encounter. Just heaped on a bit of trauma that's lasted all this time.
so in a nutshell ?
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I demand to see an image of that adorable scene with Scary.
1 am and i just sit and read. Next morning gonna be hard.
Great chapter.
B-baka...
I went to the chapter updates blog post... but it seems as if you've not updated the blog itself, so I'm stuck waiting here.
~TOOWC
Awesome chapter! Glad to see another update again!
But not only that you added in Octavia, one of my personal favorite characters, and you have not view Chris as good friend (not sure if they ain't friends) but it's great to know that Octavia accepts him! That made my day, however you have Vinyl and Octavia set up as a couple here. I'm not against same-sex (yuri) pairing but almost EVERY... SINGLE... FANFIC I like from her more than have of the time has the Mane 6 or background ponies in same sex pairing and I'm TIRED OF IT ALREADY!
Seriously, I know you have Lyra and Bon Bon set up like that, but mostly all of these fanfics here have yuri pairing and frankly I'm getting sick of seeing it every time! Not to say they're not well-written or anything but can we honestly move away from them from time to time? Most romance fics have this and I can't help but groan. It's not you, it's me. I need to not take it in strides too much, but I can't help it. Bloody tiring I tell you.
Which is why my current fanfics are devoid of same-sex pairings (I MIGHT add in a minor scene or no-name ponies in my Anthro one) seeing as there's plenty of males in Canterlot and other places even though Ponyville has a more higher female-to-male ratio. I'm not against it like I said, and I might make a fanfic of such a pairing one day, but for now I want to move away from the 'norm' here and keep it mostly 'in-universe canon" with how pairings are seen in the show.
*Ahem* Well then... back to the story. So we see what Silver Wing did to Bon Bon and I have to say, though it might not be the most vile thing he did, it was incredible wrong and emotionally hurtful to trick Bon Bon just to have a little 'fun' under the rug. From a girl's point of view that's hurtful and traumatizing considering how they believe the guy they loves them back and use them for their own selfish gains. It's not an easy thing to overcome.
Though what Silver Wing was unforgivable, I found Rebecca's treatment towards Chris the worst one as girls are more 'mental' and 'emotional' hurtful towards others when they want to be mean-spirited about it. Some girls just like stringing and playing a "naive" guy along for the fun of it and then open-fully humiliated them for the fun of it and I could only imagine how hurtful she was to him... making me think of the song "Scotty Doesn't Know" from Euro Trip. I felt bad for him, but it's great that he's overcome it on his own and shows a good personal growth for him and how wise he came from it.
He's a pretty cool guy.
Then back to Bon Bon and Chris, I for one am glad how close the two have become and how much Bon Bon is coming out of her shell to open up to him. Even though the little accident where she touched his hand by mistake I'm glad to see that she initial loved the feeling of his hands and hopefully her fears distill soon so she can see why Lyra loves his hands. I want Bon Bon to ask Chris about the Parental Book soon enough and then reveal to him that Princess Cadance could make it possible for him and Lyra to conceive a child together. That would make his day, but at the same time I wonder if Bon Bon will pop the question if Chris would leave Equestria if a way back to his world opens up? I like to see Bon Bon's reaction when she learns that Chris doesn't plan to return home even if a gateway appears for it.
And for the big prank revenge against Lyra? Perhaps have her dye her fur a different color, maybe pink? I remember in the story "How to Court an Alicorn" about how fur is like woman's hair and that you NEVER mess with it and Celestia wouldn't come out of her room to see Anny because of Fleur surprising her with pink bursting in her face and ruining her fur. Or something like Chris not having 'fun under the rug' for her for at least 2 months.
Throwing suggestions out there.
Anyway I hope the next update comes soon! I want to see more Chris and Bon Bon interaction soon! I want to see their kiss scene before June 13th hits! :D
This is VirusChris signing off!
Thank you for an excellent chapter.
I was glad to see Lyra's part of the story.
I'm glad to see the story is not being rushed, romance will bloom for Crisp and Bon Bon, it will just have to tKe it onecaramel candy at a time.
I am hoping for a chapter where Crisp and Vinyl become buddies... No romance between them, but a drinking buddy you can bitch to about your other half, or hopefully, the other two thirds...
5909191 This from the guy who has Will actually go back through the portal?!?! Fie on thee sirrah, fie I say!
Kidding, just kidding! (Btw, I gave a nod to both Will and Chris in one of my recent one shots.)
I am beginning to wonder however, if you and Puss are the same person from alternate timelines... Both of you write excellent stories. Both of you have a fine touch when expressing the emotions of your characters. And both of you keep surprising me with the pleasantly unexpected twists and turns of you plots. (STORY plots... sheesh!)
Not sure if there was a The Third Roommate reference in there or if my brain is trying to convince myself that there was...
5909403 "Took it really hard" you say?
Ahhhhhhh, I really liked that chapter. I'm glad her phobia didn't magically melt or something. It's still around, and it seems like it's realistically progressing. Systematic desensitization. I apologize, I'm a psych major, that stuff nerds me out something fierce. But yeah, I like all of this and I like how it's going. Your style is as good to read as always and I really enjoy when new chapters of your stories come up.
My heart aches! So many emotions and adorable feelings!
This is great.
damn and things were going so well.
you haz get like and fav
Another fantastic chapter as usually especially since you included best ship! Bon Bon is so adorable and Chris is literally the best guy ever. Unlike a certain Will I've read about...
A good chapter. We learn a bit more of there past and I kind of want Silver Wing to mwet Chris now and get a broke muzzle.
Good chapter. Nice to see some bonding between Chris and Bon Bon as well as Lyra and Octavia (I wonder how she would feel if she knew the real truth about the "cruise"). Even had a little Bon Bon and Scary bonding moment. I think Bon Bon is slowly improving.
Also, were those little line separators between POV changes that I saw...?
Great chapter, but there's some things you may want to edit.
I suggest adding a comma after "Chris".
I suggest adding a comma after "tomorrow".
That should be "Lyra's".
I suggest adding an "of" between those words.
Yay my sundaybathreading time has been saved again
Lovley chapter as always and even my favorit duo made an appearance
Absolutely beautiful story so far, I can't wait to get to read the next chapter. :)
Wow story about Rebecca hit close. I know a Chris and Rebecca that went through something similar to what happened in this chapter.
Needed more Scary, the idea of a spider trying to wrap caremels is adorable to me.
Very enjoyable chapter. Kind of surprised myself that I read this while you did your stream and alternated between the two.
I can't help but think of these two songs as I was reading the part about Silver Wing and Rebecca.
Nice chapter. I think it's absolutely adorable when Bon Bon interacts with Scary. Just too cute!
Great chapter, but there's one problem: we all now will have a long wait until you get the next chapter finished and out to us! 5%?! It's going to be forever before it's done!
Wonderful chapter. I will anxiously await the next.
What can I say but Bravissimo!
If anyone can help Bon Bon get over her fears, it's Scary. That little spider's far too adorable to be terrifying
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Actually after this chapter I'm pretty sure puss is going to not write 15k word chapters again for a while. Although, he said that this one was going to be short, only 7k words or so, and 8,000 extra awesome words later we get this awesome chapter.