Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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A little crazy? I think that might be an understatement for this... I think Lyra's going to go hopping mad.
Wonderful chapter as always. I really feel sorry for Bon Bon and am really looking forward to how things goes. ^^
No matter how crazy
Wow usually Bon Bon is portrayed as the sane one out of that pair. I like the mix up.
Oh, poor BonBon.
I know that feeling all too well.
stop playing with my feels!
A little crazy?....that should be interesting......
Lyra's gonna be mad? Hell I'm mad. I think pissed, furious, livid, homicidal(not really) would all be better words to describe what I'm sure Lyra is feeling.
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I'm now seeing Lyra go one of two ways. Option one:
And option two:
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Either way should be highly entertaining.
That was done quite well.
so is that a special skill set or did she use a .exe?
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I'm sorry.
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it might be a mix of all that.
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HAHAHAH! I see what you did there.
Fixed it.
Because Puss reminded me of this video...
I am so done with Bon Bon right now.
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So is Lyra. Well not really... She's mad at her, or will be, but Lyra isn't going to let this go so easily.
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I'm just ready for Bon Bon to get the ever-loving shit slapped out of her. She's dragged this on for far too long. At this point, she's just making excuses to validate her (bullshit) fears.
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Awww. I wouldn't call them bullshit. I've been left by someone like Bon Bon and ever since then I've had issues getting involved with others.
5699668 What's the bullshit part is that she won't speak up about any of this.
She's just making it worse by not telling anyone, and it pisses me off. It's fine to have fears, rational or not. It's another thing when you keep it from those close to you. When she does that, and shuts them out, she is no better than those who have wronged her.
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And that my friend, is a lesson she needs to learn. Stick around I think you might like what happens.
5699689 At this point, I'm so done that part of me wants Lyra to leave her, to teach her a freaking lesson.
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That might happen to. Who knows?
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Well, considering this doesn't have a sad or tragedy tag, and it's titled "Acceptance", I highly doubt that will happen.
Anyway, in other things, if you decide you need another editor for you to
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its ok, i understand why you cant just "magic" them together. but i notice alot of bon bon hate, especially since you have hinted very strongly to a more, hmmm conservative upbringing on bon bons family background. this could lead to her reluctance to share her feelings as she understands this isnt a widely accepted view point anymore but its REALLY hard to undo a life time of mental conditioning. also, are we sure bon bon doesnt have a massive phobia of spiders?
5699418 Yup she has some serious abandonment issues.
Must have more!! Keep up the good work!
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The title could be a ruse! and I might need another editor! My stuff differently needs editors. but I have a lot of people helping me with that already, but if someone get sick or is to busy I will send you a note.
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All that will be brought to light soon. and I never said she didn't have a fear of spiders.
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It better not be a ruse. There is evil, then there is beyond evil.
I think Chris needs to take Lyra home and tuck her in for the night, then head to Bon bon's to "return her cloak," then have a little talk with her, through a closed door for Bon Bon's comfort if need be.
But... The mention of the dreamscape makes me think that Luna is going to get involved. Possibly by helping Bon Bon through some kind of spider/hand nightmare scenario.
Bon Bon, you have autism level 100. Stop being a cunt
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You need to read this to see why you're wrong to feel that way. 5695558
Don't go condemning a character just because you think something should be easy. No matter what reasoning you think you have, as long as you maintain your stance in regards to such a person or their situation, you cannot be in the right, as it shows an utter lack of understanding and empathy.
The fact she tried at all should be applauded, because it flies in the face of everything her life is founded on.
To try and put it into perspective, picture a straight homophobe basically being forced into going out with a homosexual and tell me if you think everything would be alright - because it's effectively similar to what Bon Bon's going through. Chris is completely alien to her, and from her reactions I'd say he's everything that her parents and her own experiences have taught her to hate or avoid due to teachings or pain. But she tried it anyway. That sort of deep-rooted pain doesn't just come out in the open easily. It isn't discussed over tea happily. It HURTS coming out, too. Bon Bon is afraid of Chris, to a degree, but mostly afraid of herself and for herself. Scared senseless because she just wants to avoid the same kind of pain and indoctrinated traditionalism that she's lived her life with her.
And at the end, after not being able to go through with it anymore, after the fear and internal hurt got too much, she fled. And she felt horrible about it, because she can't get over her feelings - yet it also shows she did wind up caring about him as a person, perhaps even at least a friend. So now she has guilt on top of at least a couple decades of forced perspectives and being deeply wounded.
From your posts, all I see is that you feel a certain way over what's happened, and that you don't like the outcome. You then automatically began justifying it into misplaced aggression and blame. What you feel is absolutely irrelevant and doesn't matter to this story or its analysis. You need to think about how Bon Bon feels, not that Chris and Lyra are sad or upset, because they were the ones who were happy beforehand and during - they already had effectively no issues surrounding the event, where Bon Bon has been suffering since before this story started, and increasingly moreso as Lyra tried and tried to get her to go sleep with Chris, whom until quite recently she absolutely reviled and was jealous of, all due to experiences steeped in personal pain and internal suffering.
Bon Bon is the victim here. Being angry at her is so wrong it's not even funny if it was a joke.
actually I think Lyra will come by the next day to find a sick Bon Bon laying on the cold floor with a open door. We get a nice story of Lyra and Chris helping her get better.
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I like this direction your heading. Ignore the bon bon haters, she seems like a real person. People aren't that simple sometimes, and people don't do what's best for themselves all the time, they react how they were raised. It takes a massive force of will to try and change ingrained behavior. He'll, we can just look at smoking, everyone knows it kills you, but people still do it.
Anothet great chapter. I'm really enjoying your characterization of Bon Bon snd the allusions to her less than stellar past relationships. Keep up the great work man.
Again thank you for a short but very entertaining chapter...
So when Bon Bon and Chris have a foal, how about Cadfael for a name...
A Welsh name That sounds like it could be a pony name...
5700049 Hot damn. I don't think anyone could have put it better.
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If Lyra has that hand aramature thing somewhere in storage... I think we may have just found the source of Bon Bon's phobia of spidery hands.
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I don't disagree with you. I feel like I should rephrase.
I don't hate Bon Bon by any means, I'm just frustrated--exasperated even. With the situation, with her upbringing, with a lot of things. I want her to come around, and it saddens me that she is beating herself up over this.
I understand that Bon Bon is hurting, and that she is the victim, and that it is not easy to undo years of indoctrination. That being said, it is a valid reason, but not a valid excuse for her behavior. There comes a point where the bandage has to be ripped off. A point where she has to start taking the steps towards acceptance through her own volition, not through coercion or duress. She was led to the water--dragged even, and she's thirsty as hell, but she hasn't had a drink yet. She's made some baby steps, and that is to be admired, but she is not completely without fault either.
There were multiple times where she could have said something to either Chris or Lyra when she was uncomfortable with his closeness, or his hands. I'm quite sure, given the characterization, that Chris would be understanding, and do his damndest to back off. Instead, she lets the anxiety build, and hits critical mass at the restaurant.
Take for instance, like you said, a homophobe going out with a homosexual person. In my experience, when the homophobe gets uncomfortable, they make it known, and certain actions are taken to deescalate the situation. Bon Bon did the equivalent of letting the person make multiple passes at her before shooting them in retaliation.
Should they have pressured her into it? Probably not.
Could they have taken smaller steps towards getting Bon Bon used to the human? Certainly.
Should Bon Bon have spoken up sooner? Perhaps.
There isn't really a right or wrong here, and that's what I like about this story. Each side has it's fuckups, and that's what makes it real, and interesting to read. I'm curious as to where this story will go, I'm just exhausted.
I want Bon Bon to be happy, I want her to stop hurting, but for that to happen, there has to be full disclosure from both parties.
I understand where you are coming from, and I appreciate you taking the time to write out a thoughtful response and such. I'm sorry I came off as so hateful and angry, I let my emotions take control of my keyboard.
Here's looking to the next chapter, and hopefully, some resolution.
Have a good night.
Huh... this isn't what I expected on how the date night would end. Not just because this chapter it's so short, but because Chris and Lyra weren't there to try to fix things before Bon Bon finally expresses her fears so they can work it out and try to go on another date again.
Oh well, despite one cliffhanger after another, I look forward to what you have stored for your next update. Although I do fear the worst on how crazy we are talking about when it comes to Lyra.
5700049 This is well stated and pretty much how I feel about the whole thing.
PussPuss - you have done an excellent job in developing your characters. Bon Bon and the others feel so realistic to me. I can't wait to see how Lyra tries to deal with it because she seems oblivious to things at times so I'm not sure she has the right personality to deal with Bon Bon's issues.
I think Luna might have to intervene on this before stuff goes too out of hoof.
It might just be the nudge Bon Bon needs to learn their side of the story.
Indeed.
I just want to wrap her up in a blanket, hold her close, and promise things will work out.
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Yeah I'm pretty sure I shouldn’t be crying at my own fanfiction haha. but I did and now I feel like a loser.
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Well written...
Anything else...hmm i've already mentioned feels so that feels old doesn't it?
Oh well, just...(click link)
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I'll be honest, after that chapter about the candy shop I was expecting this date to go poorly (Not this poorly), Bon Bon to say she wasn't interested but ended up hiring Chris to help with the candy shop, where the romance would slowly blossom. Which may still happen.
mfw a new chapter is released
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Keep up the great work
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you are not a loser
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