*Pat pats the Puss Puss* The chapter lenght is short, yish, but it is good with quality, so you has A+, but not S cause so much drama o3o! Still, very good and want to see more as always ^^

Oh, my feels.

She should listen to Scary. Scary is wise in the ways of love and feelings.

She kicked out everyone but Scary.
Spider bro wont let her down.

I'm not sure what to think about the "I found out we could leave but hid it from you so we could have fun and not worry" thing. Sure, it makes a lot of sense because of the fact that they would be stressing out over what to do when they get back and detracted from the experience. While at the same time, he should have told her about it as soon as he found out because that is a HUGE and very important thing that he was hiding from her, and i can understand why she would be second guessing everything else.

Anyways, keep up the good work! i am loving this story and how it is progressing.
scary is best spider!

6167386 Your profile pic sort of ruins the delivery of that sentence.

My heart. It's all over the floor and in a million pieces.

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HA XD

Oh, my feels.

*Oh, behave

6167434 I does, doesn't it.

I didn't hate this chapter. Honestly, it did make sense. Bon Bon was really hurt by SIlver Wing. Experiences like that can make it very hard to trust again and when you do... it's very easy to lose that trust. Chris not telling Bon Bon about the door wasn't that bad itself, it's just that Bon Bon is very suspicious of anything like that (and i suppose she is also under some medication too).

“Did you even think about what would happen if one of us got hurt or sick?!” Chris asked loudly, scowling at her. “What do you think would’ve happened if we couldn’t get out?! Did you ever think about that?! Was that in your little plan, Lyra?!”

Lyra sat there, speechless. That thought never once crossed her mind when she planned to put them together. How could she have overlooked something as important as their safety? Why did she ever think this plan would work, and why did she put her loved ones in so much danger!?

I'll admit, I probably would have overlooked the safety just like Lyra. Sometimes the obvious/most important things are the ones that are easiest to overlook.

No, puss puss, why? I just got back on top of the cliff and then you push me right back over to hang!

Well if a hand touch can undo a date, what would an open door do to locked in relationship?

You are an evil genius

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Yeah, lying to bonbon is a surefire way to get her to doubt everything else.

Argh these characters can be so short sighted. At least its not drowning iin drama like Winning Pony.

The story flows nicely and bonbon has justified reasons to doubt Chris. Lyra's imprisonment of them doesn't help either.

I'm curious as to whether Chris can prove his sincerity to bonbon, trust broken is a hard thing to try to repair.

It was great to see Chris chewing out Lyra. I wonder if bonbon will go to twilight, it's certainly worthy of some kind of action.

Little late to the party folks, sorry about that!

When's the clop tho, blah blah blah you know the drill

*Comes home from work on a Saturday evening.

*Sees new chapter.

My Saturday is just starting....

6167642 Pfft, didn't expect to hear people complaining about 'Winning Pony' all the way over here. Why all the hate? XD

*Sighs* I know this is an important part to the story, but I never really enjoy parts like this... Here's hoping for happier times.

Tell me Lies!

http://youtu.be/xVD28UpY3fA

dont you fucking dare

6167404 Bonnie should ditch those losers and go out with Scary.

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Team Scary all the way!

damnit puss, always playing with my feels!

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He should bang his sister.

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I SHIP IT

nice work puss You have really out done yourself this time thanks for another great chapter

that there is no sad or tragic tag

But that ruins all the fun if you can't build up something, and then destroy it to make so many feels happen.

(I feel as though my comment didn't get thought through very well).

Very nice! I'm now thoroughly frustrated with our main characters. Of course this tension will enhance the inevitable 'let's make up and have a threesome' that will occur in the future. Which I am looking forward too! I also would like to commend you for adding this drama because most other romances tend to be nothing but fluff. Not that fluff is bad. I just like to have something solid for my mind to chew on every now and then.

So to sum it up in a few words.

Chapter nice. Me wants more.

:Edit: why the dislikes? Please enlighten me on why one would dislike a complement to the author. Have I offended?

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Vote scary for president.
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I have a feeling that people are going to hate this chapter

Nope, you did fine! Actually, I thought this was one of your better, and better-written chapters. Sure Bonny's doubts are frustrating, but she's had a few nasty shocks on top of the pain of her past, and she's drugged out and physically hurting. No doubt it will all work out in the end.

6167790 That is EXACTLY how I picture scary... just bigger.

On the contrary I enjoyed this chapter. Although it's frustrating that Bonny has such doubts. I eagerly await the next installment.

Sigh.... It went from real good to total nonsense. I just don't see how she so easily thinks this dude is just out to sleep with her then dump her. Not a high point for me in this story, hopefully next chapter clears things up. Maybe its just the pain medication or spells clouding her mind. It just feels like Bon Bon totally just up and forgot everything she had said back in the cabin.

Seems the perfect set-up for Bonnie to bond with Scary now. Chris had his turn, now it's time for Bonnie to overcome her fears of Scary too!

6167971 I can't art.
He was the cutest white spider I could find.
He was a little gift for Pusspuss.

You too?

Im really getting a pinhead off of all those damn cliffhangers! >.<

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P.S All will probably be forgiven as long as everything works out....

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Maybe he should bang her sister?

“I have to pick up a friend.”

No spider left behind.
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Actually, I can kind of understand Bon Bon's feelings of betrayal in that situation. She's been burned once before, and learning to trust again after that can be really difficult. It's something that anyone aware of her past would have to take into account: even a little "white lie" can be drastically misinterpreted by someone looking to avoid being hurt again.

When's the clop, though?

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You just keep 'loveblocking' Chris and Bonny! Damn.
Not even looking for the clop, just want these three to be together. Hopefully that happens soon.
Good chapter.

but Lyra could care less.

So she does care a little?

Don't worry, Scary will set things straight. He is, after all, best spider bro!

Huh. This is one of those stories where the romance is the best part, and the clop is just a bonus. I usually don't like pure romance stories, so you must be doing right.

Great chapter. Need more!

Even if Chris had said Bonnie that the spell had faded right after having discovered it, still the timing (the morning after the "fun") would have seemed suspicious.

Christ Bon Bon. I mean, I understand all your problems, but it's not on Chris and Lyra at this point. Bon Bon needs therapy. If one little well-intentioned white lie can make you doubt EVERYTHING about the people you love and who love you, then that is indicative of a very, very serious set of psychological issues. It's not normal or healthy and needs professional attention.

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A lot of people try to dig up 'sensible reasons' to hate on Winning Pony out of jealousy or just because they don't personally like how a character or two are portrayed. Every popular story has a whole knot of really strong haters, and then a loose organization of bitter people, but relatively very few people who have purely objective reasons to dislike it. Meanwhile all the haters try to sound like they're the objective ones, because it helps spread their negative viewpoint of the material to others if they sound like they're the ones who are right. Basic humanity 101 bullshit, pay it no mind.

I was so sure that Bonny was gonna wake up with a cybernetic hoof.

6166537 Hey, I resemble that.

Wait... why am I stealing other people's corny jokes now?

Oh gawd no, I know this is going to end well, I can't see it ending badly but holy crap man you're making me double think that //sobs
I CAN'T TAKE THIS MAN! *holds self in deep dark hole* this is making me cringe and sob on the inside ;w;

Awesome job man... awesome job.
//criez

It's an old adage: fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me. A lot goes into personal relationships and one of the biggest is people are going to hurt you. The closer some one is to you the more they will hurt you. But you cannot live your life at arms length to everyone else. That is not living, it's running away from life.

Not every romantic story ends happy, but you threw one good curve ball there...

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The next day Bon Bon declare she is joining the herd, only if scary can join in too.