Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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Do I even need to say it?
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Well... you kept asking for some clop, so... you're going to get some clop.
Glorious pony filth.
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So much filth...
Indeed! Chapter looked great, and the rest will be just as good.
~ oh wat a tease berrypunch ... I see wat u did thar ....
"15k words of sex" Sweet Mother of God this is going to be "AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (Mister Torgure voice)
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Oh, I do know! And I'm going to love it!
Well, usually I'm more into pony x pony, but in this story it's done the way I can make an exception
Good story. What about a Berry Chris squeal? They do not need to end up together but it would be a good read to see if they do.
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Very sweet chapter. But I also notice that it was given the possibility for another sequel with Berry perhaps?
We have already seen how well Chris does with sweet lil Pinch. Curious to see what happens in that final chapter, oh and the fun times next chapter... That will do nicely too...
Beautiful and heart touching.
Tinniest of nitpicks, how did Bon Bon get the liquor license for her store so quickly? And how did Chris get approved?
Whatever, that can be a cute little side story later.
I was so sure that the place they were going to was Bon Bon's parent's house.
Wonderful Chapter, lovely story...
Thank you very much!
15k of the monster mash.....dis is going to be gud
Time to order the "tissues"
(Doctor we have a new patent!)
(Another one?)
Chris on gurney rolls in
(Human? Symptoms?)
(We don't know Doctor, I believe something with sex doctor.)
Doctor picks up handheld magic scanner
(I don't believe it...)
(Doctor?)
(IT'S OVER 9000!)
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Ok better stop this joke.
Anyways, this chapter was pretty good. The scene between Chris and Bon Bon was pretty entertaining and had a good flowing interaction between the two. I liked it. But all in all the fact that Bon bon is opening up and the cross overs are semi- believable is good. so keep it up im definitely reading. And I'm lazy to make this comment longer blah blah.
6399264 Amen brother!
*tackles puss* im not letting go till i get more story! im gonna be like that annoying pet bird that caws in your ear every 5 minutes till i do
Nothing snarky, sarcastic, or mildly humorous. Just wanted you to know this chapter was full of cheese and I loved it.
Aww, yeah. My body is ready
Fifteen thousand words of pure sex...
Bring. It. On.
Oh yes, one more thing I wish to bring up!
"Pooping in the Woods!"
That mares needs to have a filter installed asap...
Awesome chapter as always, Puss. I must admit that I agree with 6399830: Lyra is in desperate need of a new brain-to-mouth filter.
Also, Scary is best spider, and Ruby Pinch is best broken condom.
Meanwhile, at Fluttershy's cabin:
15k words of naughtyness?
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you caught yourself a special agent sweetie drops
a wild berry has appeared what will you do next
the feels.
I am happy.
thanks.
A 15k word chapter that is dedicated to clop?
Challenge Accepted!
I'm going to read it all in one sitting!
Darn it, why you update right before I have to leave for work?
I got to read the beginning bit. Is somebody setting up for a big Berry Punch sequel?
...does that mean I have to somehow fit Berry into that fan art?
I got all misty-eyed there, Puss. Bonny's so happy!
Oh yeah, bow-wow-chicka-wow! ////\^^^^ω^^^^/\\\\
Almost perfect. The only thing lacking is the next part.
Bonbon overcoming her fear with Scary was really something I was looking forward to.
Feels good, man.
Also, Berry in the herd, when?
You now, just the usual conversation they have
Hahahah! Oooooh man, this chapter was so nice, I loved it! I especially loved the FIrelily part, that was a really awesome thing those two did.
I am sad the flowers won't survive though, that's depressing Oh well, there's always that one in Bon Bon's mane.
GOOD WORK YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON!
Keep it up!
Well then.
Looks like the firelilies are about to be watered any moment now~
So much spider-bro (not in any way unmanly) Sqeeing commences.
The two greatest furry wing"men" in fictional history brought together in one quote.
You glorious Bastard you.
6399919 Heheh. For me when i see 15K. This.
Great start to an amazing ending. Cant wait for the rest. pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2348-sweetiemanlytearsplz.png
Another fantastic job well done you really put a lot of effort into this as I can tell all I can say is
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You know I really hope that their is a third part to make this a trilogy as I feel you've laid some ground work for it. Mainly with the whole Bon Bon wanting kids, plus we haven't seen how Lyra and Bon Bon's families will take the news so I guess for a third you could have it be about family. Showing how their lives are after joining, how the families will take it and if Bon Bon can have kids and such.
Beautiful chapter
You wondeful bastard
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You were not kidding when you said this chapter was full of feels.
This has been an amazing story, and I'm seriously hoping to see a sequel to this.
Now.... Onto the clop. Because I think we have been all waiting for BonBon to get some human lovin'
That is one impressive hair pin if her firelily didnt fall out even once during all that. If it did fall out... Good luck.
Best line ever!
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So, I've gone and spoiled your sequel too.
There's still a LOT of space in that pic. You'd better keep up or I'll go spoil your next ten sequels as well, including the one with the spa twins x Chris. And that one with Steven Magnet. Oh, and Tom. Don't forget the one with Tom.
(This is me trying to subliminally influence you to write said sequel. Subtle, huh?)
(Also, just realized just how flexible Berry Punch is in that picture. She's practically a pretzel. A pony pretzel.)
Now Scary plots his vengeance against Berry.
Really hoping that drink is either empty or Scary can't get out. I don't think anyone wants to deal with a drunken Scary.
Thank you, Berry, thank you very much. Now the moment's ruined.
Even with Berry's very lewd jokes, at least she's a good friend that cares and gets to the point when she needs to.
To use the sexnasium.
Or they could go there. Neighagra Falls is pretty lovely to go to.
Yup, Chris has lost the battle of having his name used by both Berry and Ruby, but can't really argue that against a cute filly.
Very excited to see where this goes.
Excitement gone after seeing that it was a tease.
The next thing we find out is Lyra can understand trees.
That's Lyra's revenge for having to wear a bow.
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Don't worry. Scary doesn't bite... hard. Unless you want him to.
You have sex. That's what you do.
Again, not unless you ask him.
This is what Scary is thinking.
Thanks for that, Lyra.
I don't know what to say about this. I'm now really wanting to know where this goes at the moment. Who told you?
Firstly, you have my attention now. Secondly, I just realized I'm going to have the same amount of words for my story sex way later on. That's going to be a very long chapter; probably 25-30k words. What have I gotten myself into?
This was enjoyable.
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Me too!
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You would know.
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I have no idea what you're talking about my good sir or madam.
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I hope it's awesome.
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Yay!! I'm glad you like it even thought it's not your preference. I hope you can enjoy it!
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I agree! It would be fun lol.
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Hmm... maybe lol. And I hope you like the next chapter.
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Alcohol laws in this worlds aren't as sever. Plus, Berry knows a guy.
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man... talk about awkward...
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Your welcome friend!
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Are you going to use those tissues cause it will be so emotional?
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Hahah! That was funny lol. And I'm glad you liked it!
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Ahhh! I'm working as fast as I can.
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This whole story has been cheese, haha. I should rename it to Bon Bon's Cheese.
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Scary gonna get laid!
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Good luck!
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Throes alcohol ball.
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You are welcome.
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You're a brave man... or woman...
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I'm sorry!
Ahaha! No you don't have to update it!
6401936 that could be considered sexul to certain fetishes.
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It's okay. I cried while trying to type it.
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Sex is cumming! And I'm glad that Scary got a cuddle form Bon Bon. Also... maybe?
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Thank you! That was my fav too. It's nice to hear that others liked it as well.
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I see what you did there.
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I should write a fic with Scary and chewbacca hang out.
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More will cum soon!
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Too late.
I already did!
I call it the Berry Punch DLC patch.
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I mean, I said as much here 6401666
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.... CAW!