Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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YO, I FINALLY KNOW WHEN CLOP IS!
6271986
Shhh! No spoilers!
WOOHOO! UPDATE!
Nothing quite like a good plate of 'thumbs up', Bonnie! I think the explanation of the locked basement door was just.... Nice.
I swear to god. Every time i see that title, I've read a lot of stinkingly awful HiE in fact, I think most of them are stinkingly awful, no matter what the means of transition is (a comic book, a video game fan, a computer, a mirror, or anything else).
imaging about the damm human having sex with pony without logic or love. It like control pony's brain, there are various reasons for this. If the characters are your typical angsty teenage brony/otaku writers, they think anything would be better than life on Earth. There's no mention of how they react to not having running water, electricity, air conditioning, or all the modern conveniences. They don't make much of a change. This is the "they don't understand me, so I'll go to a world that will" stick, and is very hard to make original.
But you story? Is great.
6271993 It better be good.
So..... is there going to be another sequel, or is it just an epilogue and that's it?
I mean.... I know we've had 20 long-ass chapters, but it still feels like it just started yesterday
Awww!
You really went and did it...
{Bangs head repeatedly on desk while laughing uncontrollably}.
>> No hippogriffs
BAH
6271993
It's threesome time!
Thank you, an excellent story...
*twitch* Luna's...moon...GRAAAAHHHH!
I'll slam my head through a desk later.
Anywho, the date was really good. Glad to see Ember and Dusty again. Only thing missing was Scary joining them with a little top hat. The guy's practically family by now.
I'm also glad you put in the uncertainty of the conception spell, it kept it from being a completely "perfect" ending (Though there's one more chapter left). Feels more real. It always seems so hollow when everything is settled wrapped up in a big bow. Yes, I had to take a shot at Lyra, or I wouldn't be me.
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Bwahahah! I actually thought of you when I put that line in. I was hoping you would see it.
6272030 It would be nice to see someone write that but instead of you know... the usual, the MC immediately realizes he's made a terriable mistake as he lands in the middle of the ocean.
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life is better with a sexnasium! everyone should get one!
Typo detected. The correct spelling is "masturbate".
Keep it up Pusspuss =)
6272222 Even made it the first two words of the chapter. I'm not sure if I should feel some pride for that, but I do.
6272226 and Steve died in the loop. and talking to himself...in the sea.
The End
^___^ Omg, Such a sweet chapter! I have fallen in love with both of these stories!
Honestly, Bonny and Chris should've worked out some escalating over-the-top sexcapade romp that they could've told Lyra, just to see how far they could go before she stopped buying it.
I always say silly things at the end of these chapters, just in my nature to be like that around people I'm comfortable with... But not this time. Anyway, I wanted say I enjoy the banter between those 3 and love seeing more of it.
I'd Advocate for another squeal, but really my only method of such is breaking your legs after I find you in a car crash and force you to write... i Can't Not be silly!
What cabin would be complete without a sexnasium?
I WAS RIGHT ABOUT THE SEXNASIUM!
#CalledItOnDayOne
6272143 I was gonna comment about the very same thing lol.
Want an epilogue follow up on when they have foals in the future
Ok you where more forgiving then I would be, I don't blame you for that, but do you have any idea what you have jest done? Don't encourage her man!
As always, very good chapter ^^ and so many posibilities for a sequel... And a sexnasium!
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My thoughts exactly!
Thought, I would like to take a moment to say how much it means to me that you're reading this story! My buddy JeremyStorm and I are big fans! We both love your work and Reinventing Trixie is one of our favorite stories on this site. We often compare other fics to that stories greatness. The characters you portray in it were wonderful and I loved how you did Trixie. It was such a sweet and wonderful story to just sit down and read, and I’m a little shocked that more people haven’t read it yet.
Anyways, It’s an honor that your giving my fic a chance.
“I’ll just have to take your word for it,” Chris said as dusty started to open the bottle for them. “I’m not too familiar with the quality of hard ciders.”
Just a missed capitalization, should be Dusty.
Other than that, it was a good chapter. It was nice to see the date work out. I wouldn't mind seeing Ember or Dusty joining the herd.
I believe this is the closes thing to what Lra was talking about...
http://youtu.be/Isrd7E5nzIQ
I'm still really hoping to see Ember join their herd; a story called 'Ember's Glow' just sounds right for some reason. Also, there's a lot of material now for follow up stories: meeting both sets of parents, visiting Cadance to see about that spell, Twilight finding a way for Chris to visit his old world with his lovers by his side, vacation time with the girls on the beach in sexy swimwear....
Please do more stories!
That was a truly amazing chapter. Loved everything about it!
"Clop inbound! ETA: Still unknown but eagerly waiting!
Would be nice for the bonus chapter to be that date with Ember, with the possibility of clop. If not that's ok.
But maybe a sequel with her and the lovely 3 would be nice. You know, complete the set and give a lovely mare another chance at happiness! AND SEX! Can't forget the HOT four way sex!
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Who's a silly pony? You're a silly pony! Who is? You is! Miss Bon Bon!
Lyra!
Wild, kinky threesome in the sexnasium?
5/10 needs more clop.
Now for some things your editors missed:
Should be Dusty.
Should be Heartstrings.
Should be stirring.
Well, I'm off to hunt down a picture of Lyra wearing a bow on her horn.
– I guess there is a “never” missing.
It’s nice to see a successful date at the end, remembering how all that started. The bow is also a nice idea, bringing the spaghetti-joke back also :-).
I will be sad when the story is over , but I guess for you it will be some kind of releasing.
My feelings did the a angry bitter Mongol horde type thing. So much and so many feelings.
Scratch the threesome, and get read for the orgy!
Two weeks later...
*Chris sitting crossed armed in the cabin with both Bon Bon and Amber*
"Me and my big mouth."
You know, I'm kinda hoping you'd do another sequel to this story that is semi canon. Like Bon Bon's past comes back to haunt her as Special Agent Sweetie Drops, she gets kidnapped by an old villain of hers and it's up to Lyra and Chris to save her.
Imagine the shinanigans that would ensue
I've been waiting for this.
It's been a long, long time. But now, we're here.
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For this story, I shall listen to a song.
I have no idea how this chapter is going to go, but I get the feeling this will be perfect:
Let's do this.
...Nooo, It's black and blue.
Oh so THIS is what Chris and Bonnie had Lyra do. Didn't catch that at first.
I don't know. It could have been better. It shouldn't have been mean though, so you got that right. I'm not really sure what you could have done there, something comedic would have been nice, but then this story is an emotionally extremely high stakes one, so that'd be very hard.
I can't tell if this is going to go okay, or super, super bad.
It's such a long time since I was there, reading that.
Is that what actually happened? I don't think that was a factor in what happened at all. I don't know, I just think that Crisps, Bonnie and Lyra wouldn't have backed down that easily to a claim like that.
I smell a sequel...
Could be wrong, but just sayn....
Ahaha, YES!
Finally, we get to see what became of that. I'd almost forgotten about it.
Actually, this whole chapter has been a massive nostalgia trip. It's just like the first date, only everything is so much better. We can compare between the two, and remember the journeys the characters went through to get to where they are now.
I really like this chapter.
Old memories,
New beginning.
Saw that one coming, lol.
Vary good I like how they finely get along.