Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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When's the clop, tho?
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Damn it! I told you to wait!
I think the most appropriate punishment for Lyra is for Chris and Bonnie to double-team her until none of them can walk.
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Clop waits for no man.
5797909 So when are Lyra, Bon Bon, Chris, Dashie, Scoots-too-cutes, and Will gonna meet up?
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Sooner than you might think.
But longer than you might hope.
5797900 Bad! Bad! Go sit in the corner and think about you did wrong!
Dammit, now you have me excited for the next chapter. How long til' you think it'll be up?
Really liked this chapter. Good pacing, but do we even know exactly why Bonny's so afraid of Chris, other than the fact he's just different and his hands look weird?
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Oh, I'll think about what I did alright. (Even I don't know what I mean by that.)
Anyway, if you're asking for the next chapter of this fic, I couldn't tell ya. I just edit them as I get 'em. You'll have to ask Puss. If you're asking TFaR, sometime next weekish.
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That will be reviled in the next chapter. Also you forgot that she is afraid to get close to him like in the relationship kind of way.
I'm going to make a guess about the teaser for the next chapter:
Bonny comes across a spider, and she was traumatized by one in her youth. That's why she's afraid of his hands.
where did day 2 go?
I'm so glad I got on when I did. This is nice to see after a long day at work.
I like how this is going, Bon Bon has some moments where I'm just thinking, "Ugh, really?" But it's not a bad thing, she's still just sort of in her own mind about everything. I'm looking forward to seeing the progression of how things change. This is as well written as always, and it's great to read.
5798052 Well yeah, but she's only afraid to be in a relationship because of the things I mentioned.
Why am I arguing with the author of the story I'm making my points about?
spaghetti. Bringing people together since ever.
Looks like Chris and Bon Bon made some progress. They actually had a nice conversation with each other. That's good!
"So yeah, I hope you enjoyed this chapter!"
Enjoyed? I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
She's acting like me when.....uh...nvm. Not important. But I can relate to the mental torment that comes with being stuck between a rock and a hard place.
I'm getting the feeling that Bon Bon is going to have a nightmare, and Chris being the good guy that he is, ends up almost breaking down the door to find out what's wrong. That, or a spider drops down on Bonny's mane and she has to go to Christ to get it out.
I am most eager to finally find out exactly what Bon Bon's hang up is. Seems we may get a bit more idea of that next chapter.
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But seriously lol I was talking about how she's afraid of getting hurt like she was the last time she got close to a stallion which will be talk about more latter. But she thinks that Chris will go back to his old world soon and leave her and Lyra cause twilight is still looking for a way to send him home.
5798214 Ah, that's what you meant. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
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We will know EXACTLY what her hang up is in the next chapter.
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Your.... 20% right I would say.
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When you what?! Now that's going to bug me all day!
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YAY! That makes me happy. I was hoping somepony would like it.
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I want to say at lest a week... That is my goal anyways... This next one might be just a long as this chapter was so... idk 6-9 days?
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Yeah what Jeremy said lol.
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Pffft! Huh! N-No! *crosses arms and looks away* I mean that would be stupid! Pfft... spider fears...
5798292 Kek
The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy.
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A movie about a man who wants his damm spaghetti!
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Okay, I had to come back to comment cuz I've been thinking about it ever since.
Scoots-too-cutes is the best nickname ever.
5798292 Ugh, fine...I used to be(and still kind of am) a Hikikimori. That's all you're getting from me.
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All good dude! Things will be reveled in the next addition of THE AMAZING ADVENTURES OF BON BON AND HER ACCEPTANCE!
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Agreed.
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Spaghetti is the best!
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Chris is pastafarian, confirmed!
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How about because its the most sensible and productive thing to do when someone has clearly lost their mind and is starving themselves to death?
I had a great time reading this I especially love those bits you put in to add some humor and If I may, could I suggest a bit for your story?
it goes like this
right after chris goes to sleep after finishing his pasta he has a nightmare, not the ones that could scare you to the point of a heart attack, but the ones that go "WTF, did I eat last night?" kind of nightmare, like the video below!
just imagine that Chris is the one prepping the spaghetti not the Swedish chef
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I'm sorry I cant help myself :(
5798214 *which
Seriously though. Nice chapter. Loved it. Keep it going.
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The secrets out!
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Damn it!!! See this is why I need editors.
And thank you!
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I would say that's reasonable on like the 4th or 5th day if nothing else is working, but not the go to method.
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not if said someone has a crippling fear of you and everything you represent.
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Are there spiders under the sea? also LOL!
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I think he would have this dream only it would be Bon Bon cooking. lol
5797900 Dude this is a really good story you cant rush things like that it would ruin it just be patient.
Dat was really funny one.
Cant wait for the next chapter. Awesome story. So much joy.
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Jeremy just don't understand that. All he wants is clop. He's a weirdo.
5798585 I still don't see why he should scold himself for even considering it though.
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Oh man, you're so right. I have no respect for story-telling or character development. All I care about is pony sex.
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As a matter of fact…
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Yeah, well...
You're still a shit.
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At least I have a shit!