Lyra has been dating her human coltfriend for a little while now and wants to start a herd with Bon Bon. The problem is, Bon Bon doesn’t want to accept her feelings for the strange creature. Can the earth pony find love with the bizarre human?
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IT LIIIIIIIIIVES
Now's clop yo.
Even more glorious pony filth!
Hey Jezza, here's that clop you wanted.
Whelp, time to get reading... after I return from work in four hours.
So... much... epic... glorious... pony filth!
Did you really have to use crotch breasts?
6402621 They're mammals, aren't they?
Glorious chapter, man!
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I'm not sure if I like the pacing of the latest chapters. A New Beginning made for a reasonably satisfying conclusion for me (I liked the bookending with the beginning of the relationship), so these last few chapters have just seemed like an excessively extended epilogue.
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I for one love crotch boobs, since they fit ponies species perfectly, considering their roots are equine.
Besides, majority of mammals in the world don't have chest boobs anyways.
Putting chest boobs on ponies would actually feel very unnatural and would be a turn off for me, actually, especially in pictures. But completely avoiding mentioning boobs in a sex scene would just take away from it.
i love it!!!
~ this is the epitome of perfection in clop
brilliant
superb
If this story was in a completed book / novel I'd buy it in a heartbeat without a second thought no matter the cost ....
I'm serious
The Romans would be proud of this small orgy.
The story can't end thete what about the family meeting the folks the bat Mares etc
This story is amazing. I really hope that either in the next chapter, or an epiloge, there will be something about the herd's kids. A future scene. Or a sequel set a few years down the road. ;)
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Hear Hear!
*sees double chapter update*
Surface of the sun hot!
So another story after this one, with them getting Berry to join?
It's hard to pin exactly what it is, but your clop scenes are some of the best I've read. Definitely far better than most of the stuff that makes the featured box. It definitely helps that it's well written and your characters work so well together and are believable.
Glorious smut has arrived!!! Really liked how Bonny kept her shy yet proper attitude there. Especially when she admonished Lyra for her manners.
That cracked me up!
Commence read.
Bon Bon getting to embrace joining the herd.
Lyra having her fun.
Whelp. I finally finished reading the chapter, and I have just one thing to say:
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Alright, this has to be the hottest chapter you've writen so far. And I love it! :D
Can't wait to see what kind of closure you have prepared :D
I'm still hoping to see Amber soon. Or at least letting her have a big part on the sequel
Good chapter except for the crotch boobs and dirty talking.
That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Absolutely phenomenal! I loved every bit of it. The only thing that I think could even be improved slightly is Bon Bon's orgasms being longer. I go nuts over long descriptions of the vaginal contractions during orgasm. But that's just a personal preference, not a rule.
Only error I could find.
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Yay! Someone got it!
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Ahaha! That's an amazing title. I like it.
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They die and disappear! It doesn't matter though, cause it's still in her mane.
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Thank you!
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Dang really? You would buy a real copy? Well... that would be cool if I could get this printed haha. I'm glad you like the clop too.
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That they would.
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But... That's for the next story.
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But... then I wont have anything to write about in the next story.
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I hope you like it!
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M-Maybe...
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Thank you! That means a lot to me. I really try hard to make the clop stuff enjoyable.
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Me too, haha. That's the best part about her. She's cute.
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Did you like those things?
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Some how... I'm not surprised.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the clop. And the end chapter won't be that long.
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I'm glad you liked it!
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Thank you for finding that error and I'm glad you liked it!
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Thank you! I fixed it!
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I'm glad you think it worked out.
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Maybe I can do like a side story about all that stuff.
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Not sure why you said that twice, but yes I did. The ponies in this world are anatomically correct. Also, They have been like that since Lyra's Confection, so I had to keep it going. can't just change it on the spot.
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You know, chatting with Scary about pooping in the woods, talking to Bon Bon with her mouth full of Chris's dick. The usual.
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HOLY fuck balls Puss
you evil evil evil person. 15 k of clop? lord have mercy on us.
This is basically everyone after reading your chapter Puss
"what ya been up to? oh nothing just uh...reading that new chapter puss released"
See, I told you you had nothing to worry about! Shit was perfect, yo
*Tries to imagine quadruped ponies with chestboobs.* *screaming intensifies*
Fifteen kilowords of adorable ponies (and human!) being adorably sexcious. Bonny's a lucky mare.
Sooo... when's the Scary one-shot clopfic?
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So, is Bon Bon's next step to overcome her arachnophobia sweet, sweet spider love? Just imagine Scary looking up at Bon Bon with those big, cute eyes, his two back legs rubbing her clit, and his other legs holding her vagina open for his pedipalp limbs. Sexy.
WoW!
Bit too much if you ask me. But I don't read this story for the sex, so... *shrug*
It was nicely written at least.
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It does seem like most are enjoying it. you were right.
I think I might have saw one typo when I was going through this.
Unfortunately, it evaded me when I tried to go back and track it down. So 50% chance it wasn't a typo in the first place and my heavily distracted brain misread something, and 50% chance I couldn't find it and am as such inept. Either way you look at it I have failed you, Puss. I'm truly sorry. In my defense, if I were actually an editor, I would have taken care of any pressing concerns before reading this chapter.
Other than a possibly nonexistent typo this was great. I managed to get through it without any difficulties and finished in one sitting, even though it took a while and I had to pace myself to get through it all.
Before you ask, the answer is yes.
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I swear.
6401972 Firelilies sound so frigging pretty Dx I want to see a real one, dang it.
NEXT CHAPTER TIME!
6401972 I see what you did there
Over all the chapter was good, though I feel a bit too heavy on the detail. Its goo to finally see Bon Bon embrace the relationship, but the immense detail heavyness of it had me skimming over much of it as I just couldn't stomach what felt like unnecessary details. Missionary position however is my favorite as I feel its the most intimate one.